Comments received on poems by DaveG
I stand on the edge
Fay Slimm. said:
A journey through moments of past and preset written with careful perception your words ask questions we all try to put into words at times. Thanks for sharing this edge of betweeness.
April 6th, 2017 08:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A journey through moments of past and preset written with careful perception your words ask questions we all try to put into words at times. Thanks for sharing this edge of betweeness.
April 6th, 2017 08:38
SARCASTIC DEATH
DaveG said:
thanks for your comments sometimes its nice to know what others think
April 1st, 2017 02:35
DaveG said:
thanks for your comments sometimes its nice to know what others think
April 1st, 2017 02:35
SARCASTIC DEATH
lovelydarkanddeep said:
Wow this is a great poem! Very deep and depressing.
March 31st, 2017 11:45
lovelydarkanddeep said:
Wow this is a great poem! Very deep and depressing.
March 31st, 2017 11:45
False Peacemaker
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I agree with what DS has said.
March 24th, 2017 09:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I agree with what DS has said.
March 24th, 2017 09:14
Because there is you
vvnrose said:
Love the descriptions used in this poem. Very heartfelt.
March 16th, 2017 12:22
vvnrose said:
Love the descriptions used in this poem. Very heartfelt.
March 16th, 2017 12:22
Rebel
Goldfinch60 said:
You must live your own life and advise your children to do the same. Good write.
March 15th, 2017 09:08
Goldfinch60 said:
You must live your own life and advise your children to do the same. Good write.
March 15th, 2017 09:08
Beasts of insanity
Augustus said:
I love \"your mind their toy\" line especially so thinking of kids. Great write.
March 4th, 2017 18:28
Augustus said:
I love \"your mind their toy\" line especially so thinking of kids. Great write.
March 4th, 2017 18:28
Beasts of insanity
willyweed said:
Good one Dave, My hero Dad saves me from nightmares & slays dragons as well... go daddio! ww
March 4th, 2017 08:56
willyweed said:
Good one Dave, My hero Dad saves me from nightmares & slays dragons as well... go daddio! ww
March 4th, 2017 08:56
FANTASIES DREAM
SorrowfullyHappy said:
great write wish our world where as good as that one
March 1st, 2017 13:26
SorrowfullyHappy said:
great write wish our world where as good as that one
March 1st, 2017 13:26
FANTASIES DREAM
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it would be so nice to be in that place
March 1st, 2017 08:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it would be so nice to be in that place
March 1st, 2017 08:52
FANTASIES DREAM
willyweed said:
sounds like you may be at home right here? nice work WW
March 1st, 2017 05:40
willyweed said:
sounds like you may be at home right here? nice work WW
March 1st, 2017 05:40
