Comments received on poems by Mouse_Mango
Mind Melt
MendedFences27 said:
Erotic imaginings or a longing from separation, either way a formidable piece of sensuality. Is there a doctor in the house? Loved it. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:43
MendedFences27 said:
Erotic imaginings or a longing from separation, either way a formidable piece of sensuality. Is there a doctor in the house? Loved it. - Phil A.
March 12th, 2017 11:43
Where It All Went Wrong
MendedFences27 said:
First poem? Welcome. A good one to start with. I liked how you went from the light to the bulbs, from feet to walking, but dark and cold was a shock. Tired and strained sounded like giving up. If true. Don\'t. your talent would be wasted. Keep on writing, Work it out, get back to smiling. You\'re too good at this to let it go. More to come I hope. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 19:05
MendedFences27 said:
First poem? Welcome. A good one to start with. I liked how you went from the light to the bulbs, from feet to walking, but dark and cold was a shock. Tired and strained sounded like giving up. If true. Don\'t. your talent would be wasted. Keep on writing, Work it out, get back to smiling. You\'re too good at this to let it go. More to come I hope. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 19:05
Where It All Went Wrong
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MM ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ nicely penned but so so sad. Live gets like that for all of us sometimes ~ so we can empathise with you ! However ~ I always find that there is LIGHT ~ at the end of the Tunnel and REFUGE & COMFORT at the bottom of the Hill. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ You will find MPS a very supportive site. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
March 7th, 2017 14:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MM ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ nicely penned but so so sad. Live gets like that for all of us sometimes ~ so we can empathise with you ! However ~ I always find that there is LIGHT ~ at the end of the Tunnel and REFUGE & COMFORT at the bottom of the Hill. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ You will find MPS a very supportive site. Please check my poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
March 7th, 2017 14:24
Where It All Went Wrong
Goldfinch60 said:
The end is no place to be, keep going forward towards the light.
March 7th, 2017 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
The end is no place to be, keep going forward towards the light.
March 7th, 2017 02:56
