Comments received on poems by william mcgreal
something there is
MendedFences27 said:
I think you\'re lucky to have found this. It\'s brilliant. Save it for sure, and maybe, reach back to that voice every once in a while. It\'s a great love poem.
The twist of phrase \"Something there is\" draws in the reader. The poem runs through many emotions felt, when one is in love. There is also a sense of the other and her influences on friends and you, causing a remembrance that you \"love to sing and dance.\" Yes, I\'d say you must retain this and build upon it. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 22:31
MendedFences27 said:
I think you\'re lucky to have found this. It\'s brilliant. Save it for sure, and maybe, reach back to that voice every once in a while. It\'s a great love poem.
The twist of phrase \"Something there is\" draws in the reader. The poem runs through many emotions felt, when one is in love. There is also a sense of the other and her influences on friends and you, causing a remembrance that you \"love to sing and dance.\" Yes, I\'d say you must retain this and build upon it. - Phil A.
March 18th, 2017 22:31
Variations on a Theme of Distance
Byepolarbear said:
Natural Flight
A small bird who thinks
Nothing of letting go of
The branch and flying
Over to the next tree.
That got to me,very well put and natural flight is a very potent poem every word doing it\'s job with precision.
March 7th, 2017 14:24
Byepolarbear said:
Natural Flight
A small bird who thinks
Nothing of letting go of
The branch and flying
Over to the next tree.
That got to me,very well put and natural flight is a very potent poem every word doing it\'s job with precision.
March 7th, 2017 14:24
