Comments received on poems by niallprideaux
Can you see me?
FredPeyer said:
A nice tribute to your Grandma! She will always be with you in your heart, and yes, I do believe she can see you too!
Happy Holidays!
December 21st, 2017 21:45
FredPeyer said:
A nice tribute to your Grandma! She will always be with you in your heart, and yes, I do believe she can see you too!
Happy Holidays!
December 21st, 2017 21:45
Ghosted
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful song, Niall! The poem is quite dark, raw and to the point. Hope you don\'t feel like this anymore!!!
December 21st, 2017 11:56
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful song, Niall! The poem is quite dark, raw and to the point. Hope you don\'t feel like this anymore!!!
December 21st, 2017 11:56
Can you see me?
clair jane said:
it\'s like the 9/11 \"I miss you daddy\" video pretty
December 19th, 2017 21:47
clair jane said:
it\'s like the 9/11 \"I miss you daddy\" video pretty
December 19th, 2017 21:47
Where Would You Go?
FredPeyer said:
Niall, this is a perfect metaphor about choice. Do we opt for the familiar, or are we adventurous and choose the unknown? I would guess that most of us here would go right.
December 16th, 2017 18:41
FredPeyer said:
Niall, this is a perfect metaphor about choice. Do we opt for the familiar, or are we adventurous and choose the unknown? I would guess that most of us here would go right.
December 16th, 2017 18:41
Where Would You Go?
orchidee said:
You could go right, if you don\'t end up going up in smoke! lol. A happy birthday write too, I see. Best wishes Niall! May you always choose the right path (I mean correct, or wise path) through life.
December 16th, 2017 06:44
orchidee said:
You could go right, if you don\'t end up going up in smoke! lol. A happy birthday write too, I see. Best wishes Niall! May you always choose the right path (I mean correct, or wise path) through life.
December 16th, 2017 06:44
Where Would You Go?
daisychain said:
I like this...the path that forks right appeals to me...sounds intriguing and interesting.
December 16th, 2017 06:01
daisychain said:
I like this...the path that forks right appeals to me...sounds intriguing and interesting.
December 16th, 2017 06:01
Bully Sharks and their Prey
FredPeyer said:
Great writing and a great message, Niall! Especially today with social media, kids get bullied to the point where suizide seems to be the only option. It is so sad, and somehow we have to find a way to put a stop to it. Your poem should be \'must reading\' in any school!
October 25th, 2017 13:34
FredPeyer said:
Great writing and a great message, Niall! Especially today with social media, kids get bullied to the point where suizide seems to be the only option. It is so sad, and somehow we have to find a way to put a stop to it. Your poem should be \'must reading\' in any school!
October 25th, 2017 13:34
Kings
FredPeyer said:
This seems to be a pretty personal poem about your memories, so I don\'t have to \'get it\'. Like the writing though, reading it made me think back to my own \'spring-warm nights\'!
September 27th, 2017 21:37
FredPeyer said:
This seems to be a pretty personal poem about your memories, so I don\'t have to \'get it\'. Like the writing though, reading it made me think back to my own \'spring-warm nights\'!
September 27th, 2017 21:37
The Young Boy
FredPeyer said:
Pretty gory, Niall, but I guess war is like that. Surprise ending.
September 25th, 2017 17:37
FredPeyer said:
Pretty gory, Niall, but I guess war is like that. Surprise ending.
September 25th, 2017 17:37
Cloudbusting Love
FredPeyer said:
A lot of emotion and hope in this well written poem. I am sure something good will happen!
September 22nd, 2017 01:27
FredPeyer said:
A lot of emotion and hope in this well written poem. I am sure something good will happen!
September 22nd, 2017 01:27
You\'re Worse Than Cigarettes
FredPeyer said:
...when you\'re hooked, you\'re hooked! Be it cigarettes, drugs, or woman/man. Great reminder!
September 19th, 2017 16:06
FredPeyer said:
...when you\'re hooked, you\'re hooked! Be it cigarettes, drugs, or woman/man. Great reminder!
September 19th, 2017 16:06
The First Time...
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphor for a broken love. But think, if you can paint one, you can paint another one! One with you inside!
August 29th, 2017 02:11
FredPeyer said:
Great metaphor for a broken love. But think, if you can paint one, you can paint another one! One with you inside!
August 29th, 2017 02:11
The Boy of Gold and Stone.
FredPeyer said:
Niall, this is a great, great metaphor. False love, lies, and greed, exploitation of the weak. Your poem has everything!
August 26th, 2017 13:36
FredPeyer said:
Niall, this is a great, great metaphor. False love, lies, and greed, exploitation of the weak. Your poem has everything!
August 26th, 2017 13:36
The Boy of Gold and Stone.
malubotelho said:
Wow Naill, this is an incredible story. I loved to read it. Thanks for sharing and I\'m not sure if your birthday is today or was yesterday but I wish you a happy birthday anyways.
August 26th, 2017 10:08
malubotelho said:
Wow Naill, this is an incredible story. I loved to read it. Thanks for sharing and I\'m not sure if your birthday is today or was yesterday but I wish you a happy birthday anyways.
August 26th, 2017 10:08
The Boy of Gold and Stone.
Louis Gibbs said:
Powerful metaphor, Niall! Creative and well done.
August 26th, 2017 09:33
Louis Gibbs said:
Powerful metaphor, Niall! Creative and well done.
August 26th, 2017 09:33
Gravitational Pull
FredPeyer said:
The earth - moon metaphor can work in so many ways and in so many different situations.
Well written, Niall. I do like it!
August 25th, 2017 12:27
FredPeyer said:
The earth - moon metaphor can work in so many ways and in so many different situations.
Well written, Niall. I do like it!
August 25th, 2017 12:27
Remind Yourself:
jaybob said:
HAHA!!! raised my spirit. Thanks mate, keep making people smile!! I dont know you but you seem like a good person.
August 12th, 2017 10:24
jaybob said:
HAHA!!! raised my spirit. Thanks mate, keep making people smile!! I dont know you but you seem like a good person.
August 12th, 2017 10:24
The Quiet Ones.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is the quiet ones that normally understand more than the loud ones.
August 2nd, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is the quiet ones that normally understand more than the loud ones.
August 2nd, 2017 01:23
The Quiet Ones.
FredPeyer said:
Good poem, good subject, Niall.
While, as Heather said, quiet ones can be deep wells, could it be that some of the quiet ones simply have nothing to say? :-)
August 1st, 2017 11:44
FredPeyer said:
Good poem, good subject, Niall.
While, as Heather said, quiet ones can be deep wells, could it be that some of the quiet ones simply have nothing to say? :-)
August 1st, 2017 11:44
The Quiet Ones.
Louis Gibbs said:
A wise one said ... \"If they don\'t understand your quiet, they probably wouldn\'t understand your words.\" Well expressed herein, Niall!
August 1st, 2017 10:18
Louis Gibbs said:
A wise one said ... \"If they don\'t understand your quiet, they probably wouldn\'t understand your words.\" Well expressed herein, Niall!
August 1st, 2017 10:18
The Quiet Ones.
Heather T said:
Quiet people are usually deep wells! Unfortunately, I probably traumatize introverts. I\'m not one of those souls that can just drop my gaze when I pass by, lol. Enjoyed.
August 1st, 2017 09:26
Heather T said:
Quiet people are usually deep wells! Unfortunately, I probably traumatize introverts. I\'m not one of those souls that can just drop my gaze when I pass by, lol. Enjoyed.
August 1st, 2017 09:26
Valyria
FredPeyer said:
Niall, it does feel nice to wake up alone sometimes. Unfortunately never read Game of Thrones, but I take your words for it.
July 31st, 2017 11:21
FredPeyer said:
Niall, it does feel nice to wake up alone sometimes. Unfortunately never read Game of Thrones, but I take your words for it.
July 31st, 2017 11:21
The Trial of Forgiveness
FredPeyer said:
Niall, you wrote another fine poem here. I do like the last stanza.
July 28th, 2017 13:19
FredPeyer said:
Niall, you wrote another fine poem here. I do like the last stanza.
July 28th, 2017 13:19
#HumanRights
burning-embers said:
i\'m in uk also but...... just cos trump thinks the moon is made of cheese doesn\'t mean it is. it seems plenty of powers stop him from doing most of the stuff he says.
July 27th, 2017 11:52
burning-embers said:
i\'m in uk also but...... just cos trump thinks the moon is made of cheese doesn\'t mean it is. it seems plenty of powers stop him from doing most of the stuff he says.
July 27th, 2017 11:52
A Bad Combination (HAIKU)
FredPeyer said:
You don\'t have to mix it, you drink enough of the one, you get enough of the other in your belly.
And you are right, it can be dangerous.
July 26th, 2017 10:11
FredPeyer said:
You don\'t have to mix it, you drink enough of the one, you get enough of the other in your belly.
And you are right, it can be dangerous.
July 26th, 2017 10:11
A Bad Combination (HAIKU)
orchidee said:
I\'m the old sherry-tippler - so I say! heehee. A fine write N.
July 26th, 2017 08:41
orchidee said:
I\'m the old sherry-tippler - so I say! heehee. A fine write N.
July 26th, 2017 08:41
Thalassophobia (HAIKU)
Heather T said:
You\'ve made a nice Haiku from your fear! My son is the same way, but unsure where it comes from. I hate you had the trauma!
July 25th, 2017 23:02
Heather T said:
You\'ve made a nice Haiku from your fear! My son is the same way, but unsure where it comes from. I hate you had the trauma!
July 25th, 2017 23:02
Thalassophobia (HAIKU)
FredPeyer said:
Great Haiku Niall, could it also mean fear of deep commitment, fear of deep love?
July 25th, 2017 12:04
FredPeyer said:
Great Haiku Niall, could it also mean fear of deep commitment, fear of deep love?
July 25th, 2017 12:04
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