Comments received on poems by niallprideaux



Himiko of Yamatai: A Short Story
FineB said:

Hello Niall,

What an excellent story.

A superb write.

Alas at times it is difficult being a woman I the world wherever you maybe!

Keep writing
FineB

August 10th, 2019 09:41

Poker (Love) Games
tepo said:

If you are holding the straight flush I doubt you will lose
Sounds like you spotted a tell
Trust it
Interesting write
Plenty going on
Enjoyed the read



March 18th, 2019 18:05

New Year\'s Eve:
Fay Slimm said:

P.S. - - of course - reading the title again it is the New Year celebrations you poetically describe - a delightful read.

December 24th, 2018 11:44

New Year\'s Eve:
Fay Slimm said:

What a vivid picture of the Christmas festivities you pen here Nial - - a family gathering like none other and time to have fun whatever the age. Thanks for sharing the happy scene with us.

December 24th, 2018 11:43

New Year\'s Eve:
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

December 24th, 2018 11:28

\"There\'s no place like home.\"
chaaz said:

This is great!

October 4th, 2018 07:23

\"There\'s no place like home.\"
Shayl said:

Really good write it brings out how some people are home.

May 30th, 2018 12:45

Te deseo, Cariño (a Valentine\'s Day letter from me to me)
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, great advise! Hope you had a great valentine with yourself!

February 15th, 2018 16:22

Te deseo, Cariño (a Valentine\'s Day letter from me to me)
Lorna said:

Happy Valentines Day Niall! There....... now someone else has said it to you!

February 14th, 2018 04:44

Te deseo, Cariño (a Valentine\'s Day letter from me to me)
orchidee said:

Can make sense, I suppose, if not from an entirely selfish motive. Nice write Niall.

February 14th, 2018 02:38

The Coven (a story writing practice - part 2)
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 10th, 2018 13:50

The Coven (a story writing practice - part 1)
FredPeyer said:

Could be a great opening to a novel!
Keep on writing.

February 2nd, 2018 13:57

breathe in, breathe out...
FredPeyer said:

Very well written, niall! I personally never had anxiety attacks, but I can imagine that it must be incredibly hard.

January 31st, 2018 01:33

Humans and the Stars: My Conversations
Lorna said:

This ran like a movie in my head........

January 30th, 2018 04:49

Humans and the Stars: My Conversations
yellowrose said:

amazing, beautiful :-) interesting how you have referred to your mind as a messy bedroom with empty bottles inside.

January 30th, 2018 04:36

Cloudbusting Love
yellowrose said:

sweet! lovely read ! i love how you have added in some lines from kate bush , wow, she has some talent, doesn\'t she, amazing singer

January 30th, 2018 04:29

The Boy of Gold and Stone.
yellowrose said:

wow , i completely love this ! you wrote this very well , completely enjoyed reading this . the girl sounds very greedy , selfish and inconsiderate, to take from this boy and keep taking and taking till he is left with nothing but emptiness and anger... amazing read :-)

January 30th, 2018 04:26

Can you see me?
yellowrose said:

such a sweet piece of writing for your grandma,... so sad when people are missing in our life

January 30th, 2018 04:21

breathe in, breathe out...
yellowrose said:

panic is a terrible thing, anxiety is not nice .. you expressed this very well, a feeling like something is going to happen to you is quite scaryi like how your mind thought to distract

January 30th, 2018 04:18

breathe in, breathe out...
orchidee said:

Do you have something you must do, and not looking forward to it? It maybe something subconscious, even if you\'re not thinking of it consciously.
A sudden fear, or anxiety, or feeling pf foreboding is horrible.
Breathing in and out can be a distraction enough from it, hopefully.

January 30th, 2018 03:19

breathe in, breathe out...
Lorna said:

Very good image of panic!

January 29th, 2018 19:51

\"There\'s no place like home.\"
orchidee said:

A fine write Niall. I got no moors where I am, but it\'s a country or riverside stroll for me! lol.

January 18th, 2018 02:56

Accents
FredPeyer said:

Hat off to your grandma! Do like your poem. Sometimes I get cell phone calls from a client on the mainland who is Irish. Am lucky if I understand half of what he says! :-)

January 8th, 2018 23:20

Accents
Moom said:

This was a very interesting read. Thank you :)

January 8th, 2018 20:52

Accents
dusk arising said:

Language, pronunciaton and grammar are a thing we are taught. Taught to communicate?
Seems to me your wonderful grandma here has a way to communicate not only with words but more..... the essence of communication.... feelings.
I really enjoyed your writing.

January 8th, 2018 20:49

New Year\'s Day
FredPeyer said:

Niall, I sincerely hope your \'new shoes\' fit real well! All the BEST for 2018!

January 2nd, 2018 23:50

New Year\'s Day
orchidee said:

Good write Niall. Yet sometimes I wonder if we do the same every 12 months. Will we be saying good riddance to this year, when it ends?!

January 1st, 2018 09:31

Can you see me?
FredPeyer said:

A nice tribute to your Grandma! She will always be with you in your heart, and yes, I do believe she can see you too!
Happy Holidays!

December 21st, 2017 21:45

Ghosted
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful song, Niall! The poem is quite dark, raw and to the point. Hope you don\'t feel like this anymore!!!

December 21st, 2017 11:56

Can you see me?
clair jane said:

it\'s like the 9/11 \"I miss you daddy\" video pretty

December 19th, 2017 21:47

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