Comments received on poems by niallprideaux
Grief is... [Haiku]
Poetic Dan said:
Yeah, if only we were dung beetles. Best of luck on your journey!
Keep riding the waves, sending vibes your way.
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 13th, 2020 07:21
Poetic Dan said:
Yeah, if only we were dung beetles. Best of luck on your journey!
Keep riding the waves, sending vibes your way.
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
March 13th, 2020 07:21
Grief is... [Haiku]
Barry Hodges said:
I think you\'ll find that, in English a haiku is 5-7-5 syllables, not 5-4-5.
So your middle line could well be:
\"A box of vile stinking shit\".
February 13th, 2020 12:31
Barry Hodges said:
I think you\'ll find that, in English a haiku is 5-7-5 syllables, not 5-4-5.
So your middle line could well be:
\"A box of vile stinking shit\".
February 13th, 2020 12:31
Grief is... [Haiku]
Neville said:
I had to chuckle but acknowledge the fact that some days are exactly as you so eloquently describe....
Neville
February 12th, 2020 14:29
Neville said:
I had to chuckle but acknowledge the fact that some days are exactly as you so eloquently describe....
Neville
February 12th, 2020 14:29
Himiko of Yamatai: A Short Story
FineB said:
Hello Niall,
What an excellent story.
A superb write.
Alas at times it is difficult being a woman I the world wherever you maybe!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:41
FineB said:
Hello Niall,
What an excellent story.
A superb write.
Alas at times it is difficult being a woman I the world wherever you maybe!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:41
New Year\'s Eve:
Fay Slimm. said:
P.S. - - of course - reading the title again it is the New Year celebrations you poetically describe - a delightful read.
December 24th, 2018 11:44
Fay Slimm. said:
P.S. - - of course - reading the title again it is the New Year celebrations you poetically describe - a delightful read.
December 24th, 2018 11:44
New Year\'s Eve:
Fay Slimm. said:
What a vivid picture of the Christmas festivities you pen here Nial - - a family gathering like none other and time to have fun whatever the age. Thanks for sharing the happy scene with us.
December 24th, 2018 11:43
Fay Slimm. said:
What a vivid picture of the Christmas festivities you pen here Nial - - a family gathering like none other and time to have fun whatever the age. Thanks for sharing the happy scene with us.
December 24th, 2018 11:43
\"There\'s no place like home.\"
Shayl said:
Really good write it brings out how some people are home.
May 30th, 2018 12:45
Shayl said:
Really good write it brings out how some people are home.
May 30th, 2018 12:45
Te deseo, Cariño (a Valentine\'s Day letter from me to me)
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great advise! Hope you had a great valentine with yourself!
February 15th, 2018 16:22
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, great advise! Hope you had a great valentine with yourself!
February 15th, 2018 16:22
Te deseo, Cariño (a Valentine\'s Day letter from me to me)
Lorna said:
Happy Valentines Day Niall! There....... now someone else has said it to you!
February 14th, 2018 04:44
Lorna said:
Happy Valentines Day Niall! There....... now someone else has said it to you!
February 14th, 2018 04:44
Te deseo, Cariño (a Valentine\'s Day letter from me to me)
orchidee said:
Can make sense, I suppose, if not from an entirely selfish motive. Nice write Niall.
February 14th, 2018 02:38
orchidee said:
Can make sense, I suppose, if not from an entirely selfish motive. Nice write Niall.
February 14th, 2018 02:38
The Coven (a story writing practice - part 1)
FredPeyer said:
Could be a great opening to a novel!
Keep on writing.
February 2nd, 2018 13:57
FredPeyer said:
Could be a great opening to a novel!
Keep on writing.
February 2nd, 2018 13:57
breathe in, breathe out...
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, niall! I personally never had anxiety attacks, but I can imagine that it must be incredibly hard.
January 31st, 2018 01:33
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, niall! I personally never had anxiety attacks, but I can imagine that it must be incredibly hard.
January 31st, 2018 01:33
Humans and the Stars: My Conversations
Lorna said:
This ran like a movie in my head........
January 30th, 2018 04:49
Lorna said:
This ran like a movie in my head........
January 30th, 2018 04:49
Humans and the Stars: My Conversations
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
amazing, beautiful :-) interesting how you have referred to your mind as a messy bedroom with empty bottles inside.
January 30th, 2018 04:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
amazing, beautiful :-) interesting how you have referred to your mind as a messy bedroom with empty bottles inside.
January 30th, 2018 04:36
Cloudbusting Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sweet! lovely read ! i love how you have added in some lines from kate bush , wow, she has some talent, doesn\'t she, amazing singer
January 30th, 2018 04:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sweet! lovely read ! i love how you have added in some lines from kate bush , wow, she has some talent, doesn\'t she, amazing singer
January 30th, 2018 04:29
The Boy of Gold and Stone.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow , i completely love this ! you wrote this very well , completely enjoyed reading this . the girl sounds very greedy , selfish and inconsiderate, to take from this boy and keep taking and taking till he is left with nothing but emptiness and anger... amazing read :-)
January 30th, 2018 04:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
wow , i completely love this ! you wrote this very well , completely enjoyed reading this . the girl sounds very greedy , selfish and inconsiderate, to take from this boy and keep taking and taking till he is left with nothing but emptiness and anger... amazing read :-)
January 30th, 2018 04:26
Can you see me?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such a sweet piece of writing for your grandma,... so sad when people are missing in our life
January 30th, 2018 04:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
such a sweet piece of writing for your grandma,... so sad when people are missing in our life
January 30th, 2018 04:21
breathe in, breathe out...
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
panic is a terrible thing, anxiety is not nice .. you expressed this very well, a feeling like something is going to happen to you is quite scaryi like how your mind thought to distract
January 30th, 2018 04:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
panic is a terrible thing, anxiety is not nice .. you expressed this very well, a feeling like something is going to happen to you is quite scaryi like how your mind thought to distract
January 30th, 2018 04:18
breathe in, breathe out...
orchidee said:
Do you have something you must do, and not looking forward to it? It maybe something subconscious, even if you\'re not thinking of it consciously.
A sudden fear, or anxiety, or feeling pf foreboding is horrible.
Breathing in and out can be a distraction enough from it, hopefully.
January 30th, 2018 03:19
orchidee said:
Do you have something you must do, and not looking forward to it? It maybe something subconscious, even if you\'re not thinking of it consciously.
A sudden fear, or anxiety, or feeling pf foreboding is horrible.
Breathing in and out can be a distraction enough from it, hopefully.
January 30th, 2018 03:19
\"There\'s no place like home.\"
orchidee said:
A fine write Niall. I got no moors where I am, but it\'s a country or riverside stroll for me! lol.
January 18th, 2018 02:56
orchidee said:
A fine write Niall. I got no moors where I am, but it\'s a country or riverside stroll for me! lol.
January 18th, 2018 02:56
Accents
FredPeyer said:
Hat off to your grandma! Do like your poem. Sometimes I get cell phone calls from a client on the mainland who is Irish. Am lucky if I understand half of what he says! :-)
January 8th, 2018 23:20
FredPeyer said:
Hat off to your grandma! Do like your poem. Sometimes I get cell phone calls from a client on the mainland who is Irish. Am lucky if I understand half of what he says! :-)
January 8th, 2018 23:20
Accents
dusk arising said:
Language, pronunciaton and grammar are a thing we are taught. Taught to communicate?
Seems to me your wonderful grandma here has a way to communicate not only with words but more..... the essence of communication.... feelings.
I really enjoyed your writing.
January 8th, 2018 20:49
dusk arising said:
Language, pronunciaton and grammar are a thing we are taught. Taught to communicate?
Seems to me your wonderful grandma here has a way to communicate not only with words but more..... the essence of communication.... feelings.
I really enjoyed your writing.
January 8th, 2018 20:49
New Year\'s Day
FredPeyer said:
Niall, I sincerely hope your \'new shoes\' fit real well! All the BEST for 2018!
January 2nd, 2018 23:50
FredPeyer said:
Niall, I sincerely hope your \'new shoes\' fit real well! All the BEST for 2018!
January 2nd, 2018 23:50
New Year\'s Day
orchidee said:
Good write Niall. Yet sometimes I wonder if we do the same every 12 months. Will we be saying good riddance to this year, when it ends?!
January 1st, 2018 09:31
orchidee said:
Good write Niall. Yet sometimes I wonder if we do the same every 12 months. Will we be saying good riddance to this year, when it ends?!
January 1st, 2018 09:31
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