Comments received on poems by niallprideaux
Thalassophobia (HAIKU)
orchidee said:
I would drown before I learnt the word. I would need to yell out - Help, I got thalass-wotsit! lol. A fine write N.
July 25th, 2017 10:58
orchidee said:
I would drown before I learnt the word. I would need to yell out - Help, I got thalass-wotsit! lol. A fine write N.
July 25th, 2017 10:58
Flames
Seek said:
Fire could just as well be a metaphor for thirst. Nothing like water to quench it. Better yet and as you so aptly put it, nothing like love to douse the fire of hate.
July 24th, 2017 08:44
Seek said:
Fire could just as well be a metaphor for thirst. Nothing like water to quench it. Better yet and as you so aptly put it, nothing like love to douse the fire of hate.
July 24th, 2017 08:44
Flames
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes - a monostich - not many posted and this is great.
July 24th, 2017 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
Ah yes - a monostich - not many posted and this is great.
July 24th, 2017 03:15
When Glitter Becomes Glass
FredPeyer said:
Niall, I like this one a lot. You may have the scars, but you also have the memory and the experience.
July 23rd, 2017 14:46
FredPeyer said:
Niall, I like this one a lot. You may have the scars, but you also have the memory and the experience.
July 23rd, 2017 14:46
Have You Ever...?
FredPeyer said:
Have I ever read something like this? No
Like your style!
July 22nd, 2017 14:50
FredPeyer said:
Have I ever read something like this? No
Like your style!
July 22nd, 2017 14:50
Have You Ever...?
malubotelho said:
Nicely composed. It sucks when you are telling the truth and they don\'t believe you.
July 22nd, 2017 12:33
malubotelho said:
Nicely composed. It sucks when you are telling the truth and they don\'t believe you.
July 22nd, 2017 12:33
Remind Yourself:
Louis Gibbs said:
I hope Amanda has as much appreciation of this poem as I do, Niall. It is an interesting take on Physics, Geology, Biology, and love all rolled into one!
July 19th, 2017 15:43
Louis Gibbs said:
I hope Amanda has as much appreciation of this poem as I do, Niall. It is an interesting take on Physics, Geology, Biology, and love all rolled into one!
July 19th, 2017 15:43
Remind Yourself:
FredPeyer said:
Niall, thank you! There are days when we have to look at ourselves EXACTLY the way you describe.
July 19th, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
Niall, thank you! There are days when we have to look at ourselves EXACTLY the way you describe.
July 19th, 2017 12:16
Remind Yourself:
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Someone said similar: \"a diamond is only a piece of coal that been around a long time, and been polished up\"! Or something like that! lol.
July 19th, 2017 08:02
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Someone said similar: \"a diamond is only a piece of coal that been around a long time, and been polished up\"! Or something like that! lol.
July 19th, 2017 08:02
Ammunition
FredPeyer said:
Nice one Niall, like the first two lines, it makes for a great opening.
July 18th, 2017 10:25
FredPeyer said:
Nice one Niall, like the first two lines, it makes for a great opening.
July 18th, 2017 10:25
Ammunition
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Though I prefer a bit of \'calming summer\' while it\'s here. Not to wish the year away too quick! lol.
July 18th, 2017 08:41
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Though I prefer a bit of \'calming summer\' while it\'s here. Not to wish the year away too quick! lol.
July 18th, 2017 08:41
Pepsi Cola
FredPeyer said:
Niall, like how you use that sugar addiction to describe a love addiction. Only with me it would be Mountain Dew!
July 17th, 2017 12:24
FredPeyer said:
Niall, like how you use that sugar addiction to describe a love addiction. Only with me it would be Mountain Dew!
July 17th, 2017 12:24
Pepsi Cola
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Oh, I\'m fussy. Apart from the sugar, I can\'t have cola too fizzy, not too icy. Do I have it at all? Well, yes, but sometimes I add warm water to it. lol. (and yuk?!).
July 17th, 2017 08:26
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Oh, I\'m fussy. Apart from the sugar, I can\'t have cola too fizzy, not too icy. Do I have it at all? Well, yes, but sometimes I add warm water to it. lol. (and yuk?!).
July 17th, 2017 08:26
For I Can\'t Help Falling In Love With You.
FredPeyer said:
Strong images and great imagination. I do like this poem Niall!
July 16th, 2017 14:56
FredPeyer said:
Strong images and great imagination. I do like this poem Niall!
July 16th, 2017 14:56
For I Can\'t Help Falling In Love With You.
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very creative and expressive. Great imagery! Really made me feel.
July 16th, 2017 13:17
Its Raskolnikov said:
Very creative and expressive. Great imagery! Really made me feel.
July 16th, 2017 13:17
The 7
Nicholas Browning said:
Interesting take on a classic aspect of history. Well played sir, well played.
July 16th, 2017 00:40
Nicholas Browning said:
Interesting take on a classic aspect of history. Well played sir, well played.
July 16th, 2017 00:40
The 7
burning-embers said:
You can get an oinkment to rub on this sort of affliction you know. Good fun mate.
July 15th, 2017 08:16
burning-embers said:
You can get an oinkment to rub on this sort of affliction you know. Good fun mate.
July 15th, 2017 08:16
A Poem for Bigotry.
lostgirl24 said:
I should take this poem to my old, bigoted Catholic school and make everyone read it! Beautifully written and I just love the message!
July 6th, 2017 08:51
lostgirl24 said:
I should take this poem to my old, bigoted Catholic school and make everyone read it! Beautifully written and I just love the message!
July 6th, 2017 08:51
Keeping Up With The Reality
FredPeyer said:
I do not watch reality TV, hardly watch TV at all. Your rant was entertaining though! Rather read your poems than watch TV. :-)
July 4th, 2017 22:02
FredPeyer said:
I do not watch reality TV, hardly watch TV at all. Your rant was entertaining though! Rather read your poems than watch TV. :-)
July 4th, 2017 22:02
Asphyxiated.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I let so many things go with breath at the end of that.
Thank you sir, truly heart felt read.
July 4th, 2017 16:33
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, I let so many things go with breath at the end of that.
Thank you sir, truly heart felt read.
July 4th, 2017 16:33
Keeping Up With The Reality
Poetic Dan said:
There is no medicen on the tell lies vision.
July 4th, 2017 10:06
Poetic Dan said:
There is no medicen on the tell lies vision.
July 4th, 2017 10:06
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