Comments received on poems by Tweebtaztic
The Shore
Hypothesis said:
You have a gifted pen. The way you portray your word selection is quite accurate. Nonetheless, the story itself wasn\'t just about A shore. It simply described on how misery can get the better of us. We all have stories to read along the inevitable campfires.
Brilliant script here poet. Keep writing scholarly!
March 15th, 2017 05:23
Hypothesis said:
You have a gifted pen. The way you portray your word selection is quite accurate. Nonetheless, the story itself wasn\'t just about A shore. It simply described on how misery can get the better of us. We all have stories to read along the inevitable campfires.
Brilliant script here poet. Keep writing scholarly!
March 15th, 2017 05:23
Sea of Sorrow
Pintu Mahakul said:
Memories buried way down deep still come in mind and puzzle mind entirely. I try to sleep but sleep does not come. I hear pound of my last heart beat. I have drowned in sorrow in this wonderful world of suffering. Sadness is wonderfully expressed in this beautifully worded poem.
March 14th, 2017 06:43
Pintu Mahakul said:
Memories buried way down deep still come in mind and puzzle mind entirely. I try to sleep but sleep does not come. I hear pound of my last heart beat. I have drowned in sorrow in this wonderful world of suffering. Sadness is wonderfully expressed in this beautifully worded poem.
March 14th, 2017 06:43
Fallen
Augustus said:
I cannot hear or feel you but there is a churn in my abdomen that senses your realness. I will die knowing you live on and will take with me the grace of your presence here. The world is a better place with your pen.
March 12th, 2017 22:09
Augustus said:
I cannot hear or feel you but there is a churn in my abdomen that senses your realness. I will die knowing you live on and will take with me the grace of your presence here. The world is a better place with your pen.
March 12th, 2017 22:09
Fallen
AdamH said:
This is absoloutley amazing. Probably my favourite poem for a long time! Its the meaning a poetry; to say what you feel. And I feel you did that in such a creative way!
Would appreciate if you could give me feedback on my poetry :)
March 12th, 2017 18:09
AdamH said:
This is absoloutley amazing. Probably my favourite poem for a long time! Its the meaning a poetry; to say what you feel. And I feel you did that in such a creative way!
Would appreciate if you could give me feedback on my poetry :)
March 12th, 2017 18:09
Fallen
Hypothesis said:
This was a good read. Sometimes its best to keep away from the secret societies and pledge to your freedom first. Not everyone will ride the rollercoaster nor buy the first pair of designer shoes. We as a people need to let go of this desolated age we live it.
Nonetheless, I bid you farewell to continue living your DreamWorks. Good read poet.
March 12th, 2017 16:47
Hypothesis said:
This was a good read. Sometimes its best to keep away from the secret societies and pledge to your freedom first. Not everyone will ride the rollercoaster nor buy the first pair of designer shoes. We as a people need to let go of this desolated age we live it.
Nonetheless, I bid you farewell to continue living your DreamWorks. Good read poet.
March 12th, 2017 16:47
Familiar Plane
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful
Sad painful chronic hopeless and despairing
But beautiful well written you made me feel it all every word.
March 11th, 2017 10:01
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Beautiful
Sad painful chronic hopeless and despairing
But beautiful well written you made me feel it all every word.
March 11th, 2017 10:01
Familiar Plane
willyweed said:
good rhyme scheme deep emotions fear of fear is what I hear? good write
write on WW
March 11th, 2017 08:31
willyweed said:
good rhyme scheme deep emotions fear of fear is what I hear? good write
write on WW
March 11th, 2017 08:31
Her
willyweed said:
I hope you find love you deserve it, do not give up hope! WW
March 10th, 2017 07:46
willyweed said:
I hope you find love you deserve it, do not give up hope! WW
March 10th, 2017 07:46
