Comments received on poems by Caden_Mercer10
Reflection
kingOfOne said:
To see others as ones self is a quality rare and much needed in this world.... hale to the golden eye!
May 21st, 2018 11:10
kingOfOne said:
To see others as ones self is a quality rare and much needed in this world.... hale to the golden eye!
May 21st, 2018 11:10
Goodbye
Tris Eaton said:
I know life sucks sometimes, but please keep fighting. I have a quote that I always remember: \"sometimes good things fall apart so that greater things fall together.\" so please keep looking for the greater things to come even if it means watching all the good things fall apart. Amazing poem! Keep on writing
March 31st, 2017 16:45
Tris Eaton said:
I know life sucks sometimes, but please keep fighting. I have a quote that I always remember: \"sometimes good things fall apart so that greater things fall together.\" so please keep looking for the greater things to come even if it means watching all the good things fall apart. Amazing poem! Keep on writing
March 31st, 2017 16:45
Candle
Garry said:
A deep sense of loss portrayed through the simple image of a candle. Well crafted. Liked the inagery
March 21st, 2017 16:33
Garry said:
A deep sense of loss portrayed through the simple image of a candle. Well crafted. Liked the inagery
March 21st, 2017 16:33
Candle
Reivax Camlost said:
Wonderful! Candles are a common theme in my writing, but most of my candle poems end happily... Anyway, check some of them out. I wrote one that looked almost just like this, same shape, similar wording... And when you think about it, the poem is shaped like a candle.
March 21st, 2017 12:56
Reivax Camlost said:
Wonderful! Candles are a common theme in my writing, but most of my candle poems end happily... Anyway, check some of them out. I wrote one that looked almost just like this, same shape, similar wording... And when you think about it, the poem is shaped like a candle.
March 21st, 2017 12:56
The Weather
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, those single rays of sunshine light up all our lives and show all is right.
March 17th, 2017 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, those single rays of sunshine light up all our lives and show all is right.
March 17th, 2017 02:44
Before my Life
MendedFences27 said:
Death stops us all. What we see before us is mostly what we choose to see. Catch yourself before you go too far.
A lot said in so few words. Good one - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:42
MendedFences27 said:
Death stops us all. What we see before us is mostly what we choose to see. Catch yourself before you go too far.
A lot said in so few words. Good one - Phil A.
March 11th, 2017 15:42
