Comments received on poems by Dakotah Lavender
Forest Spirit
Discreation said:
It is as if it was I that wrote it. Spoke for many in many. Good Job.
March 13th, 2017 13:26
Discreation said:
It is as if it was I that wrote it. Spoke for many in many. Good Job.
March 13th, 2017 13:26
Our Hatchling
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. May the path he treads be filled with love and joy as his nest obviously is.
March 13th, 2017 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. May the path he treads be filled with love and joy as his nest obviously is.
March 13th, 2017 02:43
Our Hatchling
Michael Edwards said:
Cherish them but even when they leave the nest you still worry for them and their families - my children are 50, 47 and 43 respectively and we never stop worrying on their behalf.
March 12th, 2017 21:55
Michael Edwards said:
Cherish them but even when they leave the nest you still worry for them and their families - my children are 50, 47 and 43 respectively and we never stop worrying on their behalf.
March 12th, 2017 21:55
Our Hatchling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! Indeed hatchlings become full-sized dragons really, really quick! Enjoy the hatchling as long as you can! Each stage is a blessing and a new set of challenges all at the same time! Great write! I loved the metaphor! Welcome to MPS!
March 12th, 2017 21:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent! Indeed hatchlings become full-sized dragons really, really quick! Enjoy the hatchling as long as you can! Each stage is a blessing and a new set of challenges all at the same time! Great write! I loved the metaphor! Welcome to MPS!
March 12th, 2017 21:20
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