Comments received on poems by Dakotah Lavender



I try
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write. Keep trying with your obvious resilience you will succeed.

May 15th, 2017 02:29

A Dance
Dakotah Lavender said:

Thank you

April 14th, 2017 21:55

A Dance
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, keep on dancing.

April 14th, 2017 00:47

Anxiety
Dakotah Lavender said:

Thank you both for the feedback.

April 8th, 2017 21:25

Anxiety
Goldfinch60 said:

With words like these you are passing the test. Good write.

April 6th, 2017 00:59

Anxiety
Garry said:

Every one worries. Admitting this is surely one way to prevent ot getting out of control. Especially when you admit it in such lovely verse.

April 5th, 2017 12:34

Darkness
Dakotah Lavender said:

Thank you all so much for your concern, it touches my heart. Thank you.

March 31st, 2017 10:07

Darkness
AuburnScribbler said:

A wonderful poetic beacon of hope written here, well done Dakotah. I do hope you and your family are safe though.

March 31st, 2017 10:02

Darkness
Garry said:

Nice poem. I also like your comment about it. Well done.

March 31st, 2017 02:28

Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

March 31st, 2017 02:15

\"Chi-ca-go\"
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad but nature is wonderful in all its ways.

March 27th, 2017 00:52

Close Your Eyes
Garry said:

Very gentle. Beautifully written. \".... soft as a yawn\" excellent. I enjoyed it a lot.

March 26th, 2017 03:55

Close Your Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write, all life can be wonderful and closing your eyes and looking at it enhances the pleasure we can see.

March 26th, 2017 01:45

Close Your Eyes
whisperingquill said:

Nice flow great vibe excellently written

March 25th, 2017 14:59

Close Your Eyes
Dakotah Lavender said:

Thank you all so much for reading!

March 25th, 2017 13:37

Close Your Eyes
orchidee said:

Good write.

March 25th, 2017 10:56

Close Your Eyes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks DAKOTAH for sharing a very beautiful poem extolling the joy and beauty of nature. Repetition is important in classical poetry. I love the fact that you have repeated ~ CLOSE YOUR EYES AND PICTURE ~ as the 1st and 3rd line of each perfect quatrain and also that you have rhymed love 2 & 4 ~ A perfect poem in both structure and subject. I say to myself ~ what a wonderful World ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN.

March 25th, 2017 10:51

My Husband
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write, may yours and your husbands days come to be filled with light.

March 25th, 2017 01:32

My Husband
Michael Edwards said:

I have not known depression but your heart-tugging poem brings it home to me how difficult it is. I wish so much that all is overcome for you and your family.

March 25th, 2017 00:51

My Husband
Dakotah Lavender said:

Yeah I too get depression, it is just something that takes over you. Unfortunately a person with depression can be happy one day and want to die the next. It gets that way with me, mostly when I\'m away from my family, working.
I can\'t imagine the pain you\'re enduring, my sincere condolences to you.

March 25th, 2017 00:33

Invisible
P.H.Rose said:

I am everything you explain
Love this.. well done!!

March 22nd, 2017 17:53

Invisible
JJCooke said:

A fire that\'s burns as bright as yours will never be invisible. Someday, and I believe soon, someone \"important\" will see that fire and will throw gasoline on it. You\'ll be burning brighter than Sol in no time :)

March 22nd, 2017 17:41

Invisible
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS DAKOTAH ~ for a lovely but enigmatic poem. Because you are in CYBERLAND (like all of us) you are INVISIBLE ~ BUT (as GF says) you reveal a tiny bit of yourself with each poem you post. Thanks for sharing ~ please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

March 22nd, 2017 14:55

Invisible
Goldfinch60 said:

Well you are not invisible to me your words show me your soul.

March 22nd, 2017 11:58

Horses are my Drug
Tony36 said:

Better than some drugs people get addicted to, and much healthier to. Great write

March 20th, 2017 13:41

Purple
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

March 20th, 2017 02:29

Leave it Be
JJCooke said:

Another good one :) I\'m glad knowing we won\'t let our little girl dress that way. To the tower if she does! Haha

March 18th, 2017 21:23

A Bed of Concrete
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write. It is such a shame that in this day and age where there is so much for all those that have it will not share it.

March 17th, 2017 02:32

A Bed of Concrete
niallprideaux said:

This was so humbling to read... Thank you for writing this. x

March 16th, 2017 20:33

A Bed of Concrete
LAWLESS said:

So true, I was homeless with my dog for warmth. There are kind people out there. You just have to find them.

March 16th, 2017 19:02

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