Comments received on poems by Dakotah Lavender
I try
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. Keep trying with your obvious resilience you will succeed.
May 15th, 2017 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. Keep trying with your obvious resilience you will succeed.
May 15th, 2017 02:29
Anxiety
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these you are passing the test. Good write.
April 6th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these you are passing the test. Good write.
April 6th, 2017 00:59
Anxiety
Garry said:
Every one worries. Admitting this is surely one way to prevent ot getting out of control. Especially when you admit it in such lovely verse.
April 5th, 2017 12:34
Garry said:
Every one worries. Admitting this is surely one way to prevent ot getting out of control. Especially when you admit it in such lovely verse.
April 5th, 2017 12:34
Darkness
Dakotah Lavender said:
Thank you all so much for your concern, it touches my heart. Thank you.
March 31st, 2017 10:07
Dakotah Lavender said:
Thank you all so much for your concern, it touches my heart. Thank you.
March 31st, 2017 10:07
Darkness
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful poetic beacon of hope written here, well done Dakotah. I do hope you and your family are safe though.
March 31st, 2017 10:02
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderful poetic beacon of hope written here, well done Dakotah. I do hope you and your family are safe though.
March 31st, 2017 10:02
Close Your Eyes
Garry said:
Very gentle. Beautifully written. \".... soft as a yawn\" excellent. I enjoyed it a lot.
March 26th, 2017 03:55
Garry said:
Very gentle. Beautifully written. \".... soft as a yawn\" excellent. I enjoyed it a lot.
March 26th, 2017 03:55
Close Your Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, all life can be wonderful and closing your eyes and looking at it enhances the pleasure we can see.
March 26th, 2017 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, all life can be wonderful and closing your eyes and looking at it enhances the pleasure we can see.
March 26th, 2017 01:45
Close Your Eyes
whisperingquill said:
Nice flow great vibe excellently written
March 25th, 2017 14:59
whisperingquill said:
Nice flow great vibe excellently written
March 25th, 2017 14:59
Close Your Eyes
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAKOTAH for sharing a very beautiful poem extolling the joy and beauty of nature. Repetition is important in classical poetry. I love the fact that you have repeated ~ CLOSE YOUR EYES AND PICTURE ~ as the 1st and 3rd line of each perfect quatrain and also that you have rhymed love 2 & 4 ~ A perfect poem in both structure and subject. I say to myself ~ what a wonderful World ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN.
March 25th, 2017 10:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks DAKOTAH for sharing a very beautiful poem extolling the joy and beauty of nature. Repetition is important in classical poetry. I love the fact that you have repeated ~ CLOSE YOUR EYES AND PICTURE ~ as the 1st and 3rd line of each perfect quatrain and also that you have rhymed love 2 & 4 ~ A perfect poem in both structure and subject. I say to myself ~ what a wonderful World ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN.
March 25th, 2017 10:51
My Husband
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, may yours and your husbands days come to be filled with light.
March 25th, 2017 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, may yours and your husbands days come to be filled with light.
March 25th, 2017 01:32
My Husband
Michael Edwards said:
I have not known depression but your heart-tugging poem brings it home to me how difficult it is. I wish so much that all is overcome for you and your family.
March 25th, 2017 00:51
Michael Edwards said:
I have not known depression but your heart-tugging poem brings it home to me how difficult it is. I wish so much that all is overcome for you and your family.
March 25th, 2017 00:51
My Husband
Dakotah Lavender said:
Yeah I too get depression, it is just something that takes over you. Unfortunately a person with depression can be happy one day and want to die the next. It gets that way with me, mostly when I\'m away from my family, working.
I can\'t imagine the pain you\'re enduring, my sincere condolences to you.
March 25th, 2017 00:33
Dakotah Lavender said:
Yeah I too get depression, it is just something that takes over you. Unfortunately a person with depression can be happy one day and want to die the next. It gets that way with me, mostly when I\'m away from my family, working.
I can\'t imagine the pain you\'re enduring, my sincere condolences to you.
March 25th, 2017 00:33
Invisible
JJCooke said:
A fire that\'s burns as bright as yours will never be invisible. Someday, and I believe soon, someone \"important\" will see that fire and will throw gasoline on it. You\'ll be burning brighter than Sol in no time :)
March 22nd, 2017 17:41
JJCooke said:
A fire that\'s burns as bright as yours will never be invisible. Someday, and I believe soon, someone \"important\" will see that fire and will throw gasoline on it. You\'ll be burning brighter than Sol in no time :)
March 22nd, 2017 17:41
Invisible
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DAKOTAH ~ for a lovely but enigmatic poem. Because you are in CYBERLAND (like all of us) you are INVISIBLE ~ BUT (as GF says) you reveal a tiny bit of yourself with each poem you post. Thanks for sharing ~ please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 22nd, 2017 14:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS DAKOTAH ~ for a lovely but enigmatic poem. Because you are in CYBERLAND (like all of us) you are INVISIBLE ~ BUT (as GF says) you reveal a tiny bit of yourself with each poem you post. Thanks for sharing ~ please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
March 22nd, 2017 14:55
Invisible
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you are not invisible to me your words show me your soul.
March 22nd, 2017 11:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you are not invisible to me your words show me your soul.
March 22nd, 2017 11:58
Horses are my Drug
Tony36 said:
Better than some drugs people get addicted to, and much healthier to. Great write
March 20th, 2017 13:41
Tony36 said:
Better than some drugs people get addicted to, and much healthier to. Great write
March 20th, 2017 13:41
Leave it Be
JJCooke said:
Another good one :) I\'m glad knowing we won\'t let our little girl dress that way. To the tower if she does! Haha
March 18th, 2017 21:23
JJCooke said:
Another good one :) I\'m glad knowing we won\'t let our little girl dress that way. To the tower if she does! Haha
March 18th, 2017 21:23
A Bed of Concrete
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. It is such a shame that in this day and age where there is so much for all those that have it will not share it.
March 17th, 2017 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write. It is such a shame that in this day and age where there is so much for all those that have it will not share it.
March 17th, 2017 02:32
A Bed of Concrete
niallprideaux said:
This was so humbling to read... Thank you for writing this. x
March 16th, 2017 20:33
niallprideaux said:
This was so humbling to read... Thank you for writing this. x
March 16th, 2017 20:33
Always
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there is always that chance that the right path is found.
March 15th, 2017 13:38
Goldfinch60 said:
In life there is always that chance that the right path is found.
March 15th, 2017 13:38
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