Comments received on poems by Unique
Wings
Caring dove said:
i love your style of writing ! :-) again , another lovely read . so unique, how you referred to a kiwi unable to fly. when we are feeling trapped we surely want to be able to fly and i love how you bring reflection to the negatives of flight and wings, for sure , we all would love to fly but what if the outcome is worse, what if we crash and fall and be pulled even further down .. please keep sharing .. i love your work
January 25th, 2018 07:34
Caring dove said:
i love your style of writing ! :-) again , another lovely read . so unique, how you referred to a kiwi unable to fly. when we are feeling trapped we surely want to be able to fly and i love how you bring reflection to the negatives of flight and wings, for sure , we all would love to fly but what if the outcome is worse, what if we crash and fall and be pulled even further down .. please keep sharing .. i love your work
January 25th, 2018 07:34
Howl
Caring dove said:
amazing piece of poetry .. i truly loved reading this :-) :-)i love the reference to the snow shouting louder, the whispering child of the wind , the rabbits and the spirits of the trees... this is truly quite beautiful and a pleasure to read
January 25th, 2018 07:29
Caring dove said:
amazing piece of poetry .. i truly loved reading this :-) :-)i love the reference to the snow shouting louder, the whispering child of the wind , the rabbits and the spirits of the trees... this is truly quite beautiful and a pleasure to read
January 25th, 2018 07:29
Grow Up
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem, Unique, that stirs sad memories of when my daughter was fourteen and ran away from home. It is a tough age, fourteen, in what has become a tough world for a young girl. You show the wisdom to make it through this time ... congratulations! Good work.
August 7th, 2017 15:47
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful poem, Unique, that stirs sad memories of when my daughter was fourteen and ran away from home. It is a tough age, fourteen, in what has become a tough world for a young girl. You show the wisdom to make it through this time ... congratulations! Good work.
August 7th, 2017 15:47
Grow Up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ~ YES ~ You are UNIQUE and it is your uniqueness that make you ~ you ! Love the structure of your POEM ~ neat quatrains and enough rhyme and rhythm to make it easy to recite (that is the criteria of a good POEM). The SUBJECT is a bit sad but salutary ~ The Pace of Growing Up ! It\'s easier being a BOY because our Friends are less CATTY and we are not bugged by COSMETICS or even CLOTHES ! YES Girls are coerced to grow up too fast and Daughters of Friends of mine are 12 going on 21 ! In Prom pictures the Girls all look like Hollywood Stars and most of the Boys like little lads yet they are the same age. For a GIRL 14 is a magic age ~ BUT ~ don\'t let anyone force you to grow up too fast. Value your TEEN YEARS (13 ~ 19) they are the
best of your LIFE for M & F ! Love the resolve in your last line \"When i grow up ~ I want to be FREE ! ~ AMEN\" Thinking of you BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
August 7th, 2017 13:34
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ~ YES ~ You are UNIQUE and it is your uniqueness that make you ~ you ! Love the structure of your POEM ~ neat quatrains and enough rhyme and rhythm to make it easy to recite (that is the criteria of a good POEM). The SUBJECT is a bit sad but salutary ~ The Pace of Growing Up ! It\'s easier being a BOY because our Friends are less CATTY and we are not bugged by COSMETICS or even CLOTHES ! YES Girls are coerced to grow up too fast and Daughters of Friends of mine are 12 going on 21 ! In Prom pictures the Girls all look like Hollywood Stars and most of the Boys like little lads yet they are the same age. For a GIRL 14 is a magic age ~ BUT ~ don\'t let anyone force you to grow up too fast. Value your TEEN YEARS (13 ~ 19) they are the
best of your LIFE for M & F ! Love the resolve in your last line \"When i grow up ~ I want to be FREE ! ~ AMEN\" Thinking of you BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
August 7th, 2017 13:34
Weeping Willow
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful poem, Unique. I can see that tree standing tall!
July 25th, 2017 22:32
FredPeyer said:
What a beautiful poem, Unique. I can see that tree standing tall!
July 25th, 2017 22:32
Weeping Willow
burning-embers said:
Even the weeping willow bears a fruit. From that fruit grows a beautiful tree. A very soulful tree, the willow is a tree quite unique and loved by all. Your poem is really quite outstanding. If Gods creations came with a descriptive label, i think your words would befit this beautiful tree.
July 25th, 2017 17:57
burning-embers said:
Even the weeping willow bears a fruit. From that fruit grows a beautiful tree. A very soulful tree, the willow is a tree quite unique and loved by all. Your poem is really quite outstanding. If Gods creations came with a descriptive label, i think your words would befit this beautiful tree.
July 25th, 2017 17:57
Weeping Willow
Azura Nightsong said:
The feels are real here.
Beautiful wording and imagery was on point.
Willows are one of my favourite trees, though I suppose they do look quite sad.
Great job!!!
July 25th, 2017 14:48
Azura Nightsong said:
The feels are real here.
Beautiful wording and imagery was on point.
Willows are one of my favourite trees, though I suppose they do look quite sad.
Great job!!!
July 25th, 2017 14:48
Weeping Willow
charlesbarrett said:
I love this one. With all the pain in this piece, the line “I will always be seen reaching out” strikes me that much more. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:46
charlesbarrett said:
I love this one. With all the pain in this piece, the line “I will always be seen reaching out” strikes me that much more. Great write. Thanks for sharing.
July 25th, 2017 14:46
Howl
ron parrish aka wordman said:
nature and the feel of it,love and friendship
March 25th, 2017 02:19
ron parrish aka wordman said:
nature and the feel of it,love and friendship
March 25th, 2017 02:19
