Dangerous Rainfalls
Silkseduction said:

I love the last line- excellent work!
Keep sharing :)



August 1st, 2019 15:57

Where do you hide?
misskay said:

Honestly,
I couldn’t of enjoyed your poem anymore.
Great writing.

August 16th, 2018 08:47

Walk away child , Life ain\'t pretty
burning-embers said:

I expected the finale to be \'when this that or the other happens to u child - dont look at me - cos you\'re no longer pretty\'... or something similar.

August 11th, 2017 14:32

My heart saw you
Domi said:

Very well written.

July 16th, 2017 12:15

The day of death..
onepauly said:

very sad
how can I cheer you up

June 22nd, 2017 17:15

Watching My Crush
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

April 9th, 2017 00:37

Watching...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME WOLF ~ Thank you for your first poem ~ very enigmatic ! A very rhythmic free verse poem which led us deeper and deeper into The Valley of the Shadow of Death. Then suddenly (line 19) the mood changes ! Watching her destroy her life (line 18) ~ then line 19~ I am still watching her (BUT) through calmer eyes now ! You watch the anger fade away replaced by a SWEET SMILE ! OMG ~ You are watching YOURSELF in a mirror \"A beautiful wolf who is just as beautiful\" An awesome poem about extreme mood swings ! Thanks for sharing and scaring ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

April 7th, 2017 14:32