Comments received on poems by PoeticFlows



The Dove
orchidee said:

A fine write.

April 15th, 2017 06:35

Still Here
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. As long as you/we are still here we can always move forward.

April 14th, 2017 00:05

Still Here
Pls JUST LISTEN!!!!!! said:

I like it there\'s something about it thats in great comparison to the violence of reality. Great work.

April 13th, 2017 19:48

The Deer
elchupacabra said:

this is a nice take on life. thanks for sharing

April 11th, 2017 19:12

The Deer
Fay Slimm. said:

so true that the light of Now drives out any fear. A wonderful rhyme as a tribute to nature that knows what death really is.

April 11th, 2017 13:35

The Deer
P.H.Rose said:

I really like this poem
I love the analogy with
The deer.... unfortunately
I count myself in the bracket
Of fear... it only hits me at
Night, during the daytime I\'m
Fine... a poem that makes
You think, for me, is very good

April 11th, 2017 11:54

The Deer
Aamina said:

that\'s a unique message that we should all adopt x

April 11th, 2017 11:52

Forever gone~(Pantoum)
rrodriguez said:

Nicely done. I also like to write in pantoum style. I enjoyed reading your poem.

April 10th, 2017 15:10

Forever gone~(Pantoum)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND ~ Love PANTOUMS because the repetition reinforces the message ~ FORVER GONE. Most of us have experienced this in Death and Desertion it is hard to bear and the Pantoum is a good poetic from to express it ! Thanks for caring and sharing. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poetry ~ Thanks B.

April 9th, 2017 03:35

Forever gone~(Pantoum)
Garry said:

Well done. Lovely structure. Nice images.

April 9th, 2017 02:31