Comments received on poems by Cara
Burn.
Frank Prem said:
I too like the pooch in the pic, Cara.
This is good work, but? without shape/structure?
Regardless, I like the spareness of the communication.
July 17th, 2017 20:07
Frank Prem said:
I too like the pooch in the pic, Cara.
This is good work, but? without shape/structure?
Regardless, I like the spareness of the communication.
July 17th, 2017 20:07
Prelude To An Ending Pt. 1
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Well written and I\'m excited for you that you are having this dream to write. Peace and many blessings for the journey ahead. P.S. Don\'t forget to visit NAMI for all kinds of good advice regarding your health and well being.
June 28th, 2017 22:25
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Well written and I\'m excited for you that you are having this dream to write. Peace and many blessings for the journey ahead. P.S. Don\'t forget to visit NAMI for all kinds of good advice regarding your health and well being.
June 28th, 2017 22:25
Prelude To An Ending Pt. 1
FredPeyer said:
What a great first sentence for a short-story or even a novel. Grabs the reader right away. Why and how? Keep on writing, we wan to keep on reading!
June 28th, 2017 20:02
FredPeyer said:
What a great first sentence for a short-story or even a novel. Grabs the reader right away. Why and how? Keep on writing, we wan to keep on reading!
June 28th, 2017 20:02
Prelude To An Ending Pt. 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring CARA.! Great opening for a novel ~ it held my interest and left me wanting MORE ! All MOMS say \"You\'ve got no reason to be that sad ................ !\" so that will strike a CHORD ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK)
June 28th, 2017 18:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing & caring CARA.! Great opening for a novel ~ it held my interest and left me wanting MORE ! All MOMS say \"You\'ve got no reason to be that sad ................ !\" so that will strike a CHORD ~ Every Blessing ~ BRIAN (UK)
June 28th, 2017 18:05
This Damn Town.
malubotelho said:
It made me remember my gone days of youth on Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. Dammid and also beautiful lost days of my life. I thought was lost days but today I can see how much I\'ve learned with those sad lovely days from my past. Luckily tomorrow is always another day. Love your sincere writing.
June 23rd, 2017 22:49
malubotelho said:
It made me remember my gone days of youth on Rio de Janeiro, Brazil. Dammid and also beautiful lost days of my life. I thought was lost days but today I can see how much I\'ve learned with those sad lovely days from my past. Luckily tomorrow is always another day. Love your sincere writing.
June 23rd, 2017 22:49
An Ending.
FredPeyer said:
I have to agree with the other comments that this would be a great beginning for a novel. Starting with the suicide of the heroine, then back to her life with many twists and many layers. Your writing is really good!
June 23rd, 2017 22:31
FredPeyer said:
I have to agree with the other comments that this would be a great beginning for a novel. Starting with the suicide of the heroine, then back to her life with many twists and many layers. Your writing is really good!
June 23rd, 2017 22:31
An Ending.
malubotelho said:
Your poem is so real. Great chapter for a book. Lovely
June 23rd, 2017 22:10
malubotelho said:
Your poem is so real. Great chapter for a book. Lovely
June 23rd, 2017 22:10
An Ending.
Heather T said:
Enjoyed your baleful prose. This would make a gorgeous beginning for a novel.
June 23rd, 2017 21:29
Heather T said:
Enjoyed your baleful prose. This would make a gorgeous beginning for a novel.
June 23rd, 2017 21:29
This Damn Town.
FredPeyer said:
Your writing sounds like a call for help, a deep desire for a change that does not seem to be possible. Very emotional writing that drew me in and did not want to let go.
June 22nd, 2017 14:24
FredPeyer said:
Your writing sounds like a call for help, a deep desire for a change that does not seem to be possible. Very emotional writing that drew me in and did not want to let go.
June 22nd, 2017 14:24
Whirlpools.
kevin browne said:
you\'re stirring whirlpools with this little powerful statement. well said, apart from the tears x
June 21st, 2017 11:32
kevin browne said:
you\'re stirring whirlpools with this little powerful statement. well said, apart from the tears x
June 21st, 2017 11:32
Whirlpools.
Louis Gibbs said:
I love a good short poem, and this is such a one. Good write, Cara!
June 21st, 2017 11:01
Louis Gibbs said:
I love a good short poem, and this is such a one. Good write, Cara!
June 21st, 2017 11:01
Sinking [Better Off]
Louis Gibbs said:
Very nice, well written poem. I enjoyed it, Cara.
June 21st, 2017 08:46
Louis Gibbs said:
Very nice, well written poem. I enjoyed it, Cara.
June 21st, 2017 08:46
Safe Haven.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CARA for sharing & caring. There are places of Peace & Solitude ~ where we kind find GOD and they are very precious indeed ! However there are also places of Pressure & Stress where GOD can find us and give us Peace. The first is Peace with GOD and the second the activities of the God of Peace ~ AMEN ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK)
May 17th, 2017 15:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CARA for sharing & caring. There are places of Peace & Solitude ~ where we kind find GOD and they are very precious indeed ! However there are also places of Pressure & Stress where GOD can find us and give us Peace. The first is Peace with GOD and the second the activities of the God of Peace ~ AMEN ~ Blessings BRIAN (UK)
May 17th, 2017 15:59
Some people can\'t be saved.
LML said:
This is a great reminder, some will always blame and never change. Good write🍁
May 12th, 2017 23:05
LML said:
This is a great reminder, some will always blame and never change. Good write🍁
May 12th, 2017 23:05
Some people can\'t be saved.
A. F. Naturaliy said:
Beautiful poem. It perfectly described what going on around me.
May 12th, 2017 12:43
A. F. Naturaliy said:
Beautiful poem. It perfectly described what going on around me.
May 12th, 2017 12:43
Flashbacks.
LML said:
I have one of these at least once every couple of hours. I hate PTSD
May 11th, 2017 23:14
LML said:
I have one of these at least once every couple of hours. I hate PTSD
May 11th, 2017 23:14
What my mother taught me about love.
Frank Prem said:
Woof. Bitter lessons, Cara Not all learning shows the way.
May 2nd, 2017 02:35
Frank Prem said:
Woof. Bitter lessons, Cara Not all learning shows the way.
May 2nd, 2017 02:35
