Comments on community poems by morange
- Snakeskin (Rocky Lagou)
You are so good at metaphors/similes! That last line is like a kick in the...
June 3rd, 2022 13:12
- Alcohol,! (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba)
What did you mean by \"in a grave or a POD\"?
June 3rd, 2022 13:09
- was it? (Notreally)
Ugh. This was hard to read, but very, very good. Its unfortunate how...
June 3rd, 2022 08:57
- My execution (A thousand wishes)
I love the line \"I\'m close to the ceiling fan and it\'s blowing me...
June 3rd, 2022 08:39
- In the Candlelight (JudyStella)
This gave me goosebumps! I loved using \"crimson\" to describe the...
June 2nd, 2022 13:04
- To the Blonde Boy at Church Whom I know I have no Chance with (Rocky Lagou)
Comparing slicked back hair to a pencil eraser is so evocative and...
June 2nd, 2022 10:05
- I WAS Around (Hzugman)
This gave me a much needed chuckle. Thanks!
June 2nd, 2022 09:18
