Comments on community poems by kespat@aol.com
- Lullaby Of Sin (Iva Hotko)
I\'m very confused by this poem
February 20th, 2023 18:15
- Tasted. (Fay Slimm.)
You have very colorful images, but too often it feels overwrought.
February 13th, 2023 20:48
- At Last (Kespat@aol.com)
Noir erotica......interesting term
February 12th, 2023 13:23
- Live on the Line (Kespat@aol.com)
Thanks again 🙂
February 12th, 2023 13:21
- Live on the Line (Kespat@aol.com)
Right
February 12th, 2023 06:21
- Gather. (Calladhor)
Beautiful
February 10th, 2023 11:27
- Flying on the Back of a Guilt Trip (Neville)
This is the best of your poems I\'ve read. It feels as if you\'re not...
February 10th, 2023 02:44
- The Pond (Cheyennekch)
It doesn\'t really have any punch
February 7th, 2023 00:35
- Gotta Love the Interweb (Kespat@aol.com)
To paraphrase: be careful of looking into the abyss because the abyss is...
February 5th, 2023 13:57
- The Wimp\'s Rap. (Chris Duffy)
Right
January 30th, 2023 14:12
- Just Another Way Out (Neville)
This is an encouraging start. However, there\'s a lot of extraneous...
January 25th, 2023 11:39
