All my suffering is coming to an end
Stumbled and fallen from the beginning
Pushing past the experience of my own
Seeing there's far worse in this world
Some left to starve others fighting wars
Greed separating the families hearts
This overwhelming sense to see no more
Now one mind making his very own flow
Knowing this change is in front of me
With my hands I can create many things
Undo others work or continue to build
I will show to my seeds, generosity is the key
There is no need for any arms to bread insecurities
True power comes from no external force
It comes from knowing your self as one
Everything is happening perfectly well
In every generation inspired to heal
Until then it will be on repeat
Waiting for manifesting in sync
I've put all my faith into myself
Knowing we are all connected
So now it's in a reflection
Of everything else
Let's not wait for better
We can make it now
-
Author:
Poetic Dan (
Offline) - Published: July 28th, 2018 02:06
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 31
- Users favorite of this poem: Lorna, poetboy5454.
Offline)
Comments7
You 'getting there'? You 'making it' in life?!
Lol... Yes and yes?
Many 'bad-hair days'?!
Very true.
"We can make it now"
I just need to keep on track but everyone here is making sure of that, or should I say paving the way!
I don't do paving but I will hold open the doors for you.
1 more comment
There you go you see. Wisdom and thru wisdom - vision, and thru that combination action!. Brill!
Now reflect upon the torturous path you have travelled, and those who travelled parts of the path with you. Achiever!
Look how you were and also at those who are only beginning and cannot see a path yet. Each will tread a path to wisdom. It's important not to stand in their way. Old heads grow on old shoulders.
I see more now through you
Every word was a bell going through
Thank you my friend
Making me feel true to every word I use
Brill stuff PD
Brill for you
I am frilled
As you brought light
With your writes
Appreciate the comment
You have a beautiful soul Dan.......
As must you, for we all still know haters but they'll not make me change my tune, I have to many angels like you in my ear!
Dan,
“I’ve put all my faith into myself”...
“Let’s not wait for better
We can make it now”
Live the here and the now...
The yesterdays are gone...
We don’t know about our tomorrows...
Today is the day!
I enjoyed listening to
“Love Letters To God”!
Nahko’s music is inspirational!
~Laura~
I'm not sure if it this song that angles show up unexpectedly but yes I've found all three albums changed my life and seeing him live, to add more it was the first time I met my now lady at his gig.
You've definitely been an angle in my ear, helping me feel positivity.
Thank you so much
Breathtakingly inspirational, the final two lines especially struck a chord with me. Reading pieces like this sets of a flame of joy within me, along with the finely picked song, this is one of the best writes I've ever read.
You've taken my breath away my friend, I feel so humbled by your words. That flame I've felt many times for your work I'm glad to reflect the same light.
Always appreciate your comment
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.