AUGUST
The coruscating light shines through
the canopy of waving leaves
and falls upon the forest floor
where crenelated shadows dance.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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What a well observed and beautiful description of light's ability as August burgeons growth. The word coruscate is so apt - - lovely first read of my day.
Thank you so much Fay. It often surprises me how much punch you can pack in a short piece and hopefully I've achieved that here.
Superb description of walking through natures art.
Thanks Andy
I never knew some much happened in August! Does coruscating and crenellating only happen in August?!
*gets out dictionary!*
Oooh August is such a busy month - what with crenelated corpuscles and coruscating crotons - supportive underwear is the answer.
Ooh very busy, so I see! I know 'castellations' - fake painted brick work in some churches! Painted so the shapes look like bricks.
Lovely, i see small wildlife scurrying from my path.
It conjures up a great scene. Well at least I hope it does
I enjoyed this Michael. August is such a beautiful time of year. As your poem describes.
Thank you Kat
THANKS MIKE ~ August come she must ! I the N Hemisphere always the most profuse flowering even ina heat wave ! Thanks for sparing time to share ! Yours as ever Brian & Angela. Please check WELLINGTON by ANGELA and our FUSION "ICE CREAM" Thanks A & B !
Thank you both - there is so much beauty around us - sadly not many of us see it.
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