PURE COMMERCE

Michael Edwards

 

 

 

PURE COMMERCE 

 

Between looming storefronts

imprisoning half light

plastered with shop signs

and peppered with awnings

tattered and flapping

as  stale winds are blowing

the flaking paint falling

and  cans roll and clatter

in debris-filled gutters

reflected in windows

cobwebbed and dirty

disguising the  gloom

of the rooms  hot and sweaty

where anonymous  strangers

make deals with damp handshakes.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Michael Edwards © June 2018

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 4th, 2018 00:47
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Goldfinch60

    So true and so often carried out Michael - and that is just the politicians!

  • Michael Edwards

    Thanks Andy

  • orchidee

    What they up to there?! heehee.

  • Michael Edwards

    Probably trading in very small packets of flour - making fairy cakes?

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Ahhhh Mon Ami Michael ~ Tousjours et Tousou ? C'e la vie aujours d'hui ! Your Friends too BRIAN et ANGELA

    • Michael Edwards

      Il arrive tout le temps or so I am told - never been involved myself.

      • Laura🌻

        Malheureusement...
        to BRIAN et ANGELA ‘s comment!

      • Heartwriter

        You describe crooked deals so well!!!! Great write.

      • orchidee

        Cooeee - how's that evening going?!

        • Michael Edwards

          Been out to a BBQ run by the Village Heritage group - great evening and now feeling a bit p++++d

        • Laura🌻

          Michael,

          Back in the hood where the undesirable deals are constant...unfortunately!

          Love your pic!
          How’s your new computer working out?

          ~Laura~

          • Michael Edwards

            Thanks Laura. The computer is superb - so easy to use and a seamless change-over. All thanks to using a local store where you get personal service and hardly any difference in price to buying it from a large chain or on-line.



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