Stimulation.
Beware embracing with fervent desire
a romantic involvement.
It can enmesh worse than netting of steel, and curse
flesh with fire.
Emotion consumes, dictates every movement,
lays bare vulnerability and
exposes raw hearts.
Life on knife-edge of sheer captivation, when started,
can really excite.
Bliss enlightens affection yet passion betokens control,
and demands more stimulation which
bewilders the soul.
Chasing the dream requires taking a hold of the skirt
of reality and flirting
with something akin to voluntary insanity.
It can rattle sensations like a canine shaking a bone.
Vincibility bespeaks depth of personal need, uncovers
exposure to seeds of proneness.
Love grips so tight it cleaves to the core, yet emotion
augments as it elevates too.
So does this vigorous vivaciousness, this tempest
of pure implication appeal
dear to you ?
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Imagination taking off after viewing the picture - - hope you enjoy.
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A 'swoony' write Fay. But I swoon at the least thing! lol.
Fay this a lovely sensitive write written as only you could.
Another beauty of a write Fay. Like Michael said only you can do. You are unique my dear.
BEAUTIFUL FAY ~ I love it when a PICTURE stirs the MUSE and in his instance a PERFECT PICTURE (early Anime ?) has spawned a PERFECT POEM. I love the fact that you have penned a warning to hose who have become (over) stimulated ! Romance ~ enmeshes, Emotion ~ consumes, Bliss ~ bewilders, "Chasing the Dream" is akin to insanity and rattles sensations (I like the sound of that !), Vincibility ~ exposes, Love grips so tight it ~ Cleaves as does VIGOROUS VIVACIOUSNESS ~ AMEN ! Thanks for Sharing & Scaring both of us ~ Thanks for seeing so so much in a beautiful Picture of True Love Devotion ~ Peace & Joy ~ BRIAN & ANGELA WE have saved as a FAVE !
Beautiful write once more Fay.
the picture I believe you refer to is delightful mid to late Taisho maybe.. the poem you penned to justify your initial impressions, divine and of which I have no doubt.. Neville x
Ooooh - I really forgot this one Nev - you are resurfacing my fling into gentle erotica methinks - - -- I did several after that mode a while back - I wonder however what made me imagine the gist of that verse from such a delicate picture --- - - genuine thanks anyway for your dedication to examine my range of subjects and glad this one met with your ready approval . x Fay
How could I not approve.. tis luverly Kay and who knows what aspect, or part of that painting may have inspired you so... whatever it was.. I for one am grateful to it... N x
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