Mercy Mildness

orchidee



Tune: Grafenberg

(one tune to 'City of God, how broad and far')

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Seeking to find way through with God

See path His Son has trod

Has gone before us, He our way

To light of dawning day

 

People rejoice, redeemed, restored

Return now to your Lord

Christ our only mediator

He our confidence sure

 

None other one could pay the price

But His life did suffice

The perfect sacrifice, offering

We Him our praises bring

 

He graces mild upon us showers

Forgiveness us endowers

His Spirit given dwells within

To keep us free from sin

 

Propitiation, God speaks kind

To human heart and mind

Come find through Christ my Son life true

Salvation e'en to you

 

For He seeks not our law-keeping

But our lives to Him bring

Then empowered to meet each need

His Spirit does us lead

 

Christ in us the hope of glory

E'en to eternity

Find here my heart, my life, I pray

Your humble home alway

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 9th, 2018 02:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: A hymn-poem in 8686 metre. I wanted to express something of 'propitiation' (long word there!), as it conveys mildness, grace, comfort, kindness, mercy. Not that we escape or are excused our sins, but they can be forgiven by Christ.
  • Category: Spiritual
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Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Indeed Orchi. Good write.

    • orchidee

      Thanks Gold.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      GREAT HYMN UNCLE STEVE ~ And as you have given us the WORDS a chance for KARIKROAKY ! Love the poem which reminds us of the BLESSINGS JESUS brings to our everyday lives and is also our Assurance of Eternal Life with HIM in HEAVEN ~ AMEN Your loving NEPHEW ~ BRIAN

      • orchidee

        Yep, but I'll make your karaoake difficult. Gotta have that long word there, all 5 syllables of it. I can't say it proper - propiti-wotsit!

      • w c


        Christ is such a blessing for me a wretched sinner. Your poems remind me I am saved. Thank you

        • orchidee

          Thanks w c. We're all 'wretched' in that sense, and needing salvation.

        • Fay Slimm.

          "Christ in us" - a wonderful phrase - love this hymn-poem Orchi dear friend.

          • orchidee

            Thanks Fay. Yes, sometimes we may think that God only lives in a building - a church. We may say 'It's Sunday, so I'm going to see God at church today!'

          • Gary Edward Geraci

            Interesting to see this peculiar form of “even” where your using it as “e’en”. You’ve got to love these licenses and liberties we take when writing verse! Yes, we are destined for eternity with our Lord who is most merciful...

            • orchidee

              Thanks Gary. Oh yes, I got to fuss over the exact number of syllables. I save myself a syllable using 'e'en' instead of 'even', for example! Or else it throws out the whole thing out of sync sometimes.



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