Moments Senryu.

Goldfinch60



Each moment in time

Is a fleeting one in life,

So treasure them all.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 12th, 2018 01:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Treasure each moment.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 20
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold. In a 'moment' I shall sing! The next moment everyone ran away. Hmm, strange that. lol.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi.
      I will be singing in the Church choir in a while, it is a Communion Service this morning.

      • orchidee

        Thanks Gold. I'm not against 'happy-clappy'. But they don't seem to have Communion much. Sometimes it seems tacked on, as if it 'gets in the way'. Some places have it every week, or certain Sundays. Depends which church we are at, I suppose.
        But I don't want to sing 'I wanna scream it out from every mountain top' during Communion - hardly meditative! Not that I'm solemn, or monk-like!

      • Michael Edwards

        Great senryu Andy.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thanks Michael, much appreciated.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks ANDY ~ Love the "SMOOTH JAZZ" Ideal for pre-Church meditation. Love the SEN ~ CARPE DIEM ~ AMEN ! Love to JOYCE ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) & ANGELA (NZ). Please check our POEM TODAY ~ Thanks A & B

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you A & B much appreciated as always.

          • onepauly

            wait one moment.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thant moment has gone, I am now into another.

              • onepauly

                give me a minute.
                ha! ha!

              • Christina8

                Great Senryu Andy--positive message!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Christina, I am always positive.

                • onepauly

                  I fixed my mistake.



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