Aptitude.
Behind the act, if not designed
~ ~ ~ ~ with love ~ ~ ~ ~
will always run disaster.
Survival means that aptitude
~ ~ ~ ~ for love ~ ~ ~ ~
will heal a breach much faster.
No-one can steal the memory
~ ~ ~ ~ of love ~ ~ ~ ~
and what it leaves thereafter.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments6
A lovely and true write Fay.
Thanks a lot Orchi for your visit and comment.
So very true Fay.
Yes love deserves our attention in every relationship we begin Goldi - - so pleased you enjoyed the read and thank you for your visit.
Super structure Fay - even without the second line in each stanza it reads well but with it - well an excellent write.
Ah - - yes I wondered about the inclusions of love with it differing prepositions to bring out the point of each stanza - - I am glad it worked and thanks for your comment dear friend.
Thanks FAY for a lovely quote and a very elegant Poem. Yes indeed in my experience ~ Unconditional Love ~ designs ~ heals and is eternal AMEN. Yours as always BRIAN. Please check ANGELA'a POEM ~ SEVEN MORE NZ QUIRKS ~ Thanks B.
Yes love ticks all the boxes for a long-lasting relationship eh Brian - - - am on my way now to have a read of Angela's poem and with you two a wonderful reunion in beautiful New Zealand when you meet next week. Hugs from Fay
A lot of life and living shines from your short piece today.
How kind and encouraging are t;he words of your comment my friend - - thank you so much for your visit and read.
Beautiful write Fay.
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