DONT MISS THE VIDEO ON THE KIWI !
NORTH ISLAND
North Island without
The MAORI : Just another
Island in the North!
LONG WHITE CLOUD
We were hiking on
Mount Cook : Gosh! Gone our Leader
Lost in : Long White Cloud?
NEW ZEALAND WEATHER
Drifting on the Downs
Like icing sugar on cake
SNOW out of SEASON!
NORTH - SOUTH - DIVIDE ?
North Island and the
South Island : separated
ONLY BY WATER!
NEW ZEALAND AIR FORCE
If KIWIS cant fly
Why are they the EMBLEM of
N Z R A F ?
HAIKU : Concise & Precise : comments please : ANGELA XXXX
There is a POETRY & PLAY READING GROUP at the Hospital
this was my contribution, HAIKU are very popular in NZ and
generally follow the 5 7 5 syllable pattern. Love ANGELA.
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 22nd, 2018 01:19
- Category: Haiku
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Comments3
I love these forms and these are great examples - bet they went down well at the group.
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : YES I love Haiku etc short and pithy. They love my Poems in the Group and consider after three months Im morphing into a KIWI Brian thinks Ive even developed an NZ accent! Thanks for your comment : Love ANGELA XXXX
A fine write and clip Angela. I'm going for a country walk. Will I see any kiwis in UK?
Thanks UNCLE STEVE: Pleased you enjoyed the HAIKU and the KIWI! I love You Tube all human life is there at the push of a button. We call NEW ZEALANDERS KIWIS and there are lots living in the UK : very nice people. I have seen \"live Kiwis\" in NZ but only in a Bird Sanctuary. You need at least SIX SHERRIES to see a live KIWI flying round in the UK! The only ones Ive seen, in the UK, were stuffed in a Natural History Museum! Enjoy your walkies : Love ANGELA XXXX
Good descriptions here Angela.
THANKS ANDY: I always find H & S provide an insight and understanding into situations and things. Thanks for your comment : Love to Joyce & Yourself ANGELA XXXX
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