Lightness Abounds.

Goldfinch60



I rise in the early morning,

The darkness surrounds me.

I turn on the screen

And a blank page stares at me.

That is where it starts,

The words in my mind

Flow rapidly onto the light,

The light of the page.

The darkness is soon transgressed

As these words

Show that life is within me,

And the lightness abounds.

 

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2018 01:15
  • Comment from author about the poem: The light is always there for me.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • onepauly

    I have to say,
    I haven't read a better one yet.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you onepauly, you are most kind.

    • orchidee

      A fine write again Gold. Argghh! That's me not switching the light on and falling down the stairs these mornings.
      Did an 'idea' light bulb ping in your head? Or did you blow a fuse?!

      • Goldfinch60

        No I am just mean and haven't turned the electricity on yet, the laptop is connected to next doors power line.

      • Michael Edwards

        May the light stay (whoever pays for it).

        • Goldfinch60

          The light is always within us.

        • dusk arising

          Long may you emit those rays of lightness creatively illuminating our paths as we seek similar peace and wellbeing.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you da for your kind words.

          • Poetic Dan

            Yes and yes again you always say it so perfectly for my brain. I see the light you gave busting from the page, always appreciated.

            Much peace and respect

            • Goldfinch60

              You are so kind Dan, may the light be with you.

            • Lorna

              Thank goodness Andy ........ you are here another day for us!

              • Goldfinch60

                Of course i am, I don't intend to go anywhere.

              • BRIAN & ANGELA

                Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ GERRY & CHET two of the best Jazzmen of the 2O th C ~ great melancholic harmony ~ for a lazy hazy Early Autumn Afternoon !
                Love the POEM and sharing the in-site of your MUSE. Your lovely POEMS ~ you freely share each day on MPS ~ come from INSIDE YOU ~ AWESOME ! Most of mine (I must confess) are triggered by EXTERNALS. I must learn to be more Poetically Introspective ~ OK Blessings from BRIAN 😎 Love to you and JOYCE from ANGELA 🧡

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you FRED for your comments, they are wonderful musicians.

                  I always write what I feel.



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