POETIC CONSTRUCTION
The letters are the building blocks,
the words construct the skirting wall.
Punctuation interlocks
and sentences assemble all.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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a fine write and pic Michael. Yes, if no punctuation we may go on and on and on...... Maybe we do anyway.
Ask Mr Punk Tuation. Dunno his real first name.
Not sure what his first name is - it keeps changing - is it Fluc ?
Yes, could be. Any more Berles about?!
Those letters, words and punctuation can show so many ideas.
Thanks MIKE for reminding us of the fragility of the building blocks of POETRY ~ However thankfully the WHOLE of the WORDS is always GREATER than just the SUM of the WORDS. Alas MODERN POETRY is just WORDS ~ without structure - rhyme - rhythm or reason ! So the WHOLE is worst than the SUM of the WORDS ! CLASSICAL POETRY ~ has Structure - Rhyme - Rhythm & Reason in abundance ! Love the WATER MILL ~ A friend of mine lived in one in YORKSHIRE. Please CHECK ANGELAS poem today ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ YOURS AS ALWAYS ~ BRIAN !
I sail the same boat Brian I love metre but I guess (hope) that's obvious.
Well crafted almost a GEO - Metrical composition you might say... Loving the sculptures by the way,
A poem away keeps the rants away?
It's a rant free day today - oh joyloads !!
Thanks for looking in.
love the pictures. Are these models your own constructions? Nice poem too.
Thanks fb - yes all mine - they make a change from my usual artwork.
Very nice! I enjoyed your construction.
Nicely put... words are for building beautiful ideas and concepts.
The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings forth the buyers interest.
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