POETIC CONSTRUCTION

Michael Edwards

 

 

POETIC CONSTRUCTION

 

The letters are the building blocks,

the words construct the skirting wall.

Punctuation interlocks

and  sentences assemble all.

 

  • Author: Michael Edwards (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 16th, 2018 00:07
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    a fine write and pic Michael. Yes, if no punctuation we may go on and on and on...... Maybe we do anyway.
    Ask Mr Punk Tuation. Dunno his real first name.

    • Michael Edwards

      Not sure what his first name is - it keeps changing - is it Fluc ?

      • orchidee

        Yes, could be. Any more Berles about?!

      • Goldfinch60

        Those letters, words and punctuation can show so many ideas.

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks MIKE for reminding us of the fragility of the building blocks of POETRY ~ However thankfully the WHOLE of the WORDS is always GREATER than just the SUM of the WORDS. Alas MODERN POETRY is just WORDS ~ without structure - rhyme - rhythm or reason ! So the WHOLE is worst than the SUM of the WORDS ! CLASSICAL POETRY ~ has Structure - Rhyme - Rhythm & Reason in abundance ! Love the WATER MILL ~ A friend of mine lived in one in YORKSHIRE. Please CHECK ANGELAS poem today ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ YOURS AS ALWAYS ~ BRIAN !

        • Michael Edwards

          I sail the same boat Brian I love metre but I guess (hope) that's obvious.

        • Andrew Charles Forrest

          Well crafted almost a GEO - Metrical composition you might say... Loving the sculptures by the way,
          A poem away keeps the rants away?

          • Michael Edwards

            It's a rant free day today - oh joyloads !!
            Thanks for looking in.

          • fuche_bu

            love the pictures. Are these models your own constructions? Nice poem too.

            • Michael Edwards

              Thanks fb - yes all mine - they make a change from my usual artwork.

            • w c

              Very nice! I enjoyed your construction.

            • rrodriguez

              Nicely put... words are for building beautiful ideas and concepts.

            • dusk arising

              The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings forth the buyers interest.



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