UTOPIA : BEAUTIFUL ISLE OF SOMEWHERE : BEAUTIFUL !
A GREAT PLANET TO RAISE OUR FAMILY : ANGELA & BRIAN
UTOPIA : Life was idyllic
There were four other Continents
Nordia & Sudia and
Westphalia & Eastina !
Our three domestic animals
Equss : for riding & haulage
Bovuss : for milk & meat & Agnuss
For fibre & meat : Avuss for eggs !
We had smaller animals for .....
Guards and pets : Canuss & Cattus
We grew grain & fruit & veggies
We had Oxygen and Water
Metals Minerals & Oil : We
Named our Continent : UTOPIA
Thank you for reading : please comment : ANGELA & BRIAN
UTOPIA is a Continent on the Planet TRITOS in the ALTURIAN
System. There are seven Planets Unos, Dos, Tritos, Quos,
Pentos, Hexos & Heptos. Animal life on Tritos began about
10,000 years ago. Plants and aquatic life about 20,000 years
ago. The ALTURIAN System is in the MILKY WAY Galaxy
about 3 light years from Planet Earth. There are more Sonnets
in the Series about UTOPIA! Blessings & Love A & B XOXOX.
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
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A fine write A&B.
THANKS UNCLE STEVE : Pleased you enjoyed it! I know you like MUSIC so I have added 'Beautiful Isle of Somewhere'. Please check & enjoy : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡 & Blessings BRIAN 😎
This is really great !!
Thanks CHAAZ : Pleased you liked it : did you get the version with the SONG attached ? Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡 & BRIAN 😎
Puzzled at first but then I read your explanation - and a great write it is.
THANK YOU MICHAEL : Both Brian & I are SCIENTISTS and therefore interested in the interface between Science Fact & Science Fiction ! This poem is the first (of a series) which describes an Earthlike Life Bearing Planet : One of seven that circulate a distant Sun called ALTURIA. Scientists who believe in Mechanistic Evolution (spontaneous creation of "LIFE" from a fortuitous mixture of chemicals) consider that there must be many Planets in the Universe on which life has evolved : we just haven't found them yet and (if there are intelligent Beings) they just haven't contacted us yet. We are always sending Messages to THEM. The best SF is based on Science Fact : for me it must be FEASIBLE. Thanks for reading : Blessings BRIAN 😎 Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
Beautiful place I will meet you all there in time.
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ In essence the song is about HEAVEN and its good to have an assurance that through Faith in CHRIST'S AT - ONE - MENT we have our place secured. However I thought it a suitable entree for the SF Poem. Tomorrows ~ Sonnet 2 ~ will be iambic pentameter to allow a few more words. Blessing & Love to Your Good Self & JOYCE ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🧡
Nicely written. The couplet says it all.
Thanks for sharing. 🙂
THANKS TAMARA : pleased you enjoyed it ~ a sequel today : UTOPIA : Sonnet 2 please visit! Brian & I love SF but it must be based on Science Fact and our POEMS & STORIES are. Blessings Love in the Spirit ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Hello Brian and Angela.
An excellent write. Utopia, in this complex, world we are all searching for our own Utopia! The pictures are beautiful.
Keep writing
FineB
Thanks FINE ~ pleased you liked it ! Yes indeed we all love somewhere quiet & picturesque to live but also close to amenities. Essex is nice because we have Country & Coast and we are never more than 70 miles from London ! ANGELA love AUCKLAND New Zealand and wants to stay there forever ! Yours BRIAN
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