Colors so florid
all around her.
Flaming hot, torrid
causing emotions to stir.
Breathing autumn mist air
with pine and subtle oak trees.
She glares and stares
as her hair brushes with the breeze.
Her eyes partake the flamboyant
sights straight ahead.
On to her voyage
where the colors have led.
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Author:
Crystal (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 6th, 2018 10:54
- Comment from author about the poem: This is one of my favorite poems I have written. I wrote it a year ago.
- Category: Nature
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Comments8
Well written with beautiful imagery that depicts the rustic colors of Autumn. A joy to read. 🙂
so glad you enjoyed it.:)
Paints a super scene - great work.
thank you Michael. 🙂
A lovely write Crystal. Oohh, where's she going? When will she get there? heehee.
Lol. i don't know. thank you for reading and commenting. 🙂
Hi Crystal.
What an incredible, vivid and indeed colourful.poem.
The picture compliments your poem most beautifully.
Keep writing
FineB
Thank you so very much. 😀
Wow! I liked your poem, and in my mind was picture just like you had posted... Great job on this!!!
thanks!!! 😀 😀
Thanks CRYSTAL ~ Beautiful picture ~ elegant Poem ~ full of RHYME & RHYTHM to reflect the ubiquitous fall of the Autumn Leaves ~ AMEN. The colours in Old England this Season are competing with those in New England USA ! When the photosynthesis stops ~ the Anthocyanins kick in and change to pigment from green to a RAINBOW ~ We have an awesome GOD ! ~ Every Blessing BRIAN & ANGELA
thank you very much!!
The words match the picture beautifully.
thanks! 🙂 😀
Beautiful write Crystal, my favourite time of the year.
mine as well. 🙂
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