Crystal Hope

Falling colors

Colors so florid
all around her.
Flaming hot, torrid
causing emotions to stir.
Breathing autumn mist air
with pine and subtle oak trees.
She glares and stares
as her hair brushes with the breeze.
Her eyes partake the flamboyant
sights straight ahead.
On to her voyage
where the colors have led.

Comments8

  • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

    Well written with beautiful imagery that depicts the rustic colors of Autumn. A joy to read. :)

    • Crystal Hope

      so glad you enjoyed it.:)

    • Michael Edwards

      Paints a super scene - great work.

    • orchidee

      A lovely write Crystal. Oohh, where's she going? When will she get there? heehee.

      • Crystal Hope

        Lol. i don't know. thank you for reading and commenting. :)

      • FineB

        Hi Crystal.

        What an incredible, vivid and indeed colourful.poem.

        The picture compliments your poem most beautifully.

        Keep writing
        FineB

        • Crystal Hope

          Thank you so very much. :D

        • vanabba3

          Wow! I liked your poem, and in my mind was picture just like you had posted... Great job on this!!!

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          Thanks CRYSTAL ~ Beautiful picture ~ elegant Poem ~ full of RHYME & RHYTHM to reflect the ubiquitous fall of the Autumn Leaves ~ AMEN. The colours in Old England this Season are competing with those in New England USA ! When the photosynthesis stops ~ the Anthocyanins kick in and change to pigment from green to a RAINBOW ~ We have an awesome GOD ! ~ Every Blessing BRIAN & ANGELA

        • fuche_bu

          The words match the picture beautifully.

        • Goldfinch60

          Beautiful write Crystal, my favourite time of the year.



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