Infinite Clouds.

Goldfinch60



I look up at the clouds,

Their unique formation

Sail slowly by.

A streak of a ‘plane

Cuts through the air,

Creating another formation

That widens with time,

Time that changes in a moment.

And the clouds formations,

Change with infinity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 7th, 2018 01:57
  • Comment from author about the poem: I used to be in an Orchestra many years ago and I used do a trumpet solo in the Grand March from Aida - fond memories.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 21
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  • Michael Edwards

    One of my fondest memories is seeing Aida in Verona - must return. Great write.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael. I have only seen it in a live broadcast but it is a magnificent opera.

    • Andrew Charles Forrest

      Wonderful memories g layig on ones back in the grass looking at clouds...
      Those were he days, not a care in the world
      Thanks

      • Goldfinch60

        They certainly were and are the days. I often still look up at the clouds and dream. Thank you Andrew.

      • orchidee

        A fine write and clip Gold. Erm, but the clouds did not change their formation at all yesterday - it rained all day. Brrr!
        How will the clouds be for 1066 reunion? Not long now.

        • Goldfinch60

          It will be a clear day so that we can look out for arrows.

        • dusk arising

          Time, the great enigma.
          I like this, you've encapsulated an everyday experience and given the chance to marvel at somethings which, though we take them for granted, are quite extraordinary.

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you da. Yes time is an enigma all through our lives.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thank for sharing UNCLE ANDY ~ We all have MEMORIES ! AIDA great Opera by Verdi and the TRIUMPHAL MARCH is unforgettable. Love the POEM ~ I am a Cloudfreak and on Holiday CLOUD WATCHING is always one of my fave pastimes ! Blessings & love to Yourself & Joyce🧡🧡🧡🧡

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you A and B, I am often cloud watching, it can be so intriguing.

            • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

              A really well-written poem that brings back memories to most of your readers. Never got to see Aida in Verona, so the video was great. Wow! Impressive that you used to perform in the orchestra years ago, and a trumpet solo no less. That's something you will never forget.

              Your poems touch the readers' heartstrings. Thanks for sharing! 🙂

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Tamara, very much appreciated.

              • onepauly

                wonderful! what a beautiful way to describe spirit forever

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you onepauly, you are most kind.

                • kevin browne

                  And the clouds of confusion will clear to reveal a landscape of thought so intricate and beautiful that it will match your poem. Well done for this one!!

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Yes the clouds will always clear. Thank you Kevin.



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