WE ALWAYS FIND WINDMILLS SPOOKY @ NIGHT !
I was always intrigued by the WINDMILL
That stood on the opposite side of the Lake
Three stories high ~ with its Sails in the Sky
I wondered what sort of Entrance Id make !
I picked up the courage ~ acquired a Boat
To sail to the spooky opposite shore
I had a slight feeling of fear in my Throat
Could I enter the MILL ~ was I sure ?
It was dark when I entered ~ although the MOON
Shone bright ~ a door creaked and gave me a fright !
T'was then that I saw IT ~ IT made me swoon
GHOST of the MILLER ~ silhouetted in MOON !!!
I shrank back in Horror ~ started to run
When the GHOST grabbed me ~ said "Its OK SON !"
Im not a GHOST with a mystical POWER
Im just an Old Miller ~ covered in FLOUR !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments please ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
A VISUAL POEM is a Poem inspired by a Picture !
We like to write our Poems and THEN add Picture
and if appropriate a Video ! In this case ANGELA
saw the Picture in PINTEREST and sent it to me
with an outline for the Poem. We completed the
Poem together and I posted it this Morning. It is
a classical example of a VISUAL POEM ~ 🧡🧡🧡🧡
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 8th, 2018 04:21
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments6
Ha ha ha - - this fun-piece raised more than a smile for my first read of the morning......... Love the concept of a mill being haunted with folk covered in flour - ha ha .
THANKS FAY : Pleased it gave you a SMILE ! We have discussed before about PICTURE POEMS where the Picture spawns the POEM ! I found this pic in PINTEREST and it screamed HAUNTED HOUSE ! I emailed the pic and an outline to BRIAN and we crafted the POEM : COLLABORATION ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡
A very good Halloween poem! You guys did a great job! Like the rhyme and that the miller was just covered in flour----great read!!!
THANKS HERMANA CHRISTINA : When I saw the PICTURE it screamed HAUNTED MILL : BRIAN helped me to transform it into an OCTOBER POEM ! Pleased you enjoyed it ! Every Blessing : Besos y Abrazos : Tu HERMANA ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love this Brian so many things hit me being young and feeling afraid of something and it turning out ti be nothing at all
The scariest thing is our imagination
Well done
THANKS ANDREW ~ our imaginations do play tricks on us. I still think MILLERS do look like GHOSTS especially in the MOONLIGHT. They start milling very early in the Morning ! Yours BRIAN
A fine write B&A, but woof, woof! Why is Fido barking? Well, he think this poem may be too scary for me. lol.
Thanks UNCLE STEVE ~ If we cant make you swoon ~ we will put the FRIGHTENERS on YOU ~ Pleased you & Fido enjoyed it ! Blessings & Joy ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 😎🧡
Good fun right, those old millars can be frightening at times.
That is true UNCLE ANDY ~ Ive visited a few Flour Mills ended up as a GHOST myself ~ and MILLERS are always a force to be reckoned with. Angela and I love poems conceived from a PICTURE ~ Blessings & Joy ~ To YOU & JOYCE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Gave me a smile and brightened the afternoon.
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