She looks to the sea,
The white foam transporting her
To the horizon.
She looks to the sea,
Her life flowing towards her,
Harmony prevails.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 12th, 2018 01:48
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a Haiku and a Senryu on the same subject.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
Both excellent Andy
Thank you Michael, I enjoy writing 5-7-5s.
Fine writes Gold. You off to the wedding today?! See you there?!
Thanks Orchi.
In this rain, you must be joking the water will get in my scotch!
Harony G
Pure Harmony
I Liked it
Thank you Andrew, glad you liked them.
Is a 747 something to write or fly the atlantic in? Gone are the days of the 109, but i wouldnt understand german verse anyway.... especially the second line.
lovely
Thank you fb.
You done all your packing for 1066?!
I have the most important things, the Whisky and the Rioja, who needs anything else?
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ She looks to the Sea. Loved the PICTURE (reminded me of ANGELA always looking for me to return to Auckland !). loved the VIDEO Debussy le Mer by a French Orchestra ~ ultra Classical ! Love the poems my fave cinq - siete - cinq genre ! Your ~ Blessings & love to You & JOYCE ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Please add a Poem to my FUSION "What makes you Happy ?"
Thank you A & B, I too enjoy writing 5-7-5s.
a moment of serenity
Thank you ron, those moments are so special.
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