She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu

Goldfinch60



She looks to the sea,
The white foam transporting her
To the horizon.

 

She looks to the sea,
Her life flowing towards her,
Harmony prevails.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 12th, 2018 01:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a Haiku and a Senryu on the same subject.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • Michael Edwards

    Both excellent Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Michael, I enjoy writing 5-7-5s.

    • orchidee

      Fine writes Gold. You off to the wedding today?! See you there?!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi.

        In this rain, you must be joking the water will get in my scotch!

      • Andrew Charles Forrest

        Harony G
        Pure Harmony
        I Liked it

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Andrew, glad you liked them.

        • dusk arising

          Is a 747 something to write or fly the atlantic in? Gone are the days of the 109, but i wouldnt understand german verse anyway.... especially the second line.

        • fuche_bu

          lovely

        • orchidee

          You done all your packing for 1066?!

          • Goldfinch60

            I have the most important things, the Whisky and the Rioja, who needs anything else?

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ She looks to the Sea. Loved the PICTURE (reminded me of ANGELA always looking for me to return to Auckland !). loved the VIDEO Debussy le Mer by a French Orchestra ~ ultra Classical ! Love the poems my fave cinq - siete - cinq genre ! Your ~ Blessings & love to You & JOYCE ~ Brian & Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Please add a Poem to my FUSION "What makes you Happy ?"

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you A & B, I too enjoy writing 5-7-5s.

            • ron parrish aka wordman

              a moment of serenity

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you ron, those moments are so special.



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