Michael Edwards

ECLIPSE

 

 

 

They said: ‘My oh my,

all the insects will die’

when they saw the lunar eclipse.

 

Under no delusion

I came to the conclusion

they’ve got to be lunar tics.

 

Comments7

  • LAWLESS

    A laugh before bedtime. Good morning! Time? I should've been out hours ago.

    Bugs have simple minds. Are we no different?

    • Michael Edwards

      I have a simple mind - just one more brain cell and I'd be twice as bright ✨

    • Goldfinch60

      Unlike Lawless my first laugh of the day, thank you Michael.

    • orchidee

      Oh lol, a good write Michael. Miss Berles got any bugs?

      • Michael Edwards

        She takes them out on a lead and picks up their poo in poo bags - if she didn't they'd be litterbugs.

      • dusk arising

        I know you wrote this for the crater good of mankind in mind but such a cheesy subject.

        Good fun.

      • orchidee

        And can we eat cheese-logs (wood lice)? Well, it says cheese in their name......

      • Laura

        Michael,

        Another great one!
        I’m glad I read it after Santita’s posting! I needed something to cheer me up...and your “Eclipse” certainly did!

        ~Laura~

        • Michael Edwards

          Thanks Laura - pleased it cheered you up.

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          ECLIPSES ARE FUNNY THINGS UNCLE MIKE SO BEWARE ! Its 1 pm WEDNESDAY here and Im free 'til 3pm so just catching up on comments. My Poem for TODAY (Wed) will be about H & M who we saw in Auckland yesterday : I will post later ! Loved your Ditty : missed your Ducks !
          Love & Blessings ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡



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