The beavers
Building their ramparts of sticks
Against the coming cold
Work steadily through the night
Among the moon's silver drops
That shine
On their sleek fur, the lake
And the distant stand of pines
- Author: Lorna ( Offline)
- Published: November 1st, 2018 01:01
- Category: Nature
- Views: 32
- Users favorite of this poem: Michael Edwards, Laura🌻
Comments7
A piece of true poetry - a great write.
Hello Michael - nice to "see" you......
And you Lorna.
Super write, I can see that fort in my minds eye.
Hi Andy - I hope the moon drops aren't splashing you!
Lorna,
I had a feeling you were going to poetically remind us of the busy beavers! A wonderful homage to them with your fine poem!
I enjoyed listening to “Moon River”!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
Hi L - yes I wandered back! Never too far away - nights are getting longer so may spend more time writing now....... (Winter is Coming! I discovered Game of Thrones this year - yes I'm slow to get with it.......)
A lovely write and pic/video Lorna. yep, I'm gonna sing, and croon that song! One of my favourite songs it is.
Hi there Old Warrior....... I can hear you! Honestly it isn't as bad as you say!
Well, heehee, a couple of times people next to me in church have said 'I heard your nice singing'. They should have been getting on with singing themselves, not listening to me - but there you go! lol. I'm not doing solos!
There - I knew it! Whereas when my boss heard me sing he told me not to give up my day job!
i like the way you have used 'less is more' in this compact piece. No woolly descriptions of moonlit ripples on the water etc just good solid stuff letting each reader build their own mental picture.
Thanks - yes not woolly - furry............
Thanks LORNA ~ Every thing is ~ BEAUTIFUL ! Photo ~ Song (one of my faves) ~ Poem ! Beavers are very clever and their damns are always the right height etc ~ Love the big November MOON ~ AMEN Blessings & Love ~ BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡 Please check our POEM on HAPPINESS ~ Thanks B & A !
Thank you kindly B/A........
A beautiful scene created here 🌔
Thank you sylvia...........
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