Recently, I dreamt about you
like back when we were small
So innocent and life was grand
And you and I knew it all
I've dreamt about you several times
You were a calm in a scary childhood
And each time you were the same
Offering peace like a friend would
Haven't seen you since we were teens
And life was different back then
I'm glad we are on our own paths
So, until I see you again.....
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Ahh, was it you I saw? heehee. A good write Christina.
Thanks so much Orchi!!
Didn't know we'd met lol - fine work C
LOL--Thanks so much Michael!
GRACIAS CHRIS ~ Una Poema Buena ! We all have Friends (M & F) who helped us through PUBERTY (shock horror !) and like you they do pop into my dreams from time to to time. I love poems about Dreams ! Abrazos y Besos en el Spirito Sancto ~ Tu Hermano Poetico ~ BRIAN The Panda ! Please check my Fusion ~ What is Christmas about ? Thanks B !
OOh, a christmas fusion, you know I will try!! Thanks for your kind comments on my poem. Abrazos y besos en el Spirito Sancto--Christina
Christina,
A fine poem. I enjoyed reading it! It’s so true how at times we dream of childhood friends and wonder about them!
~Laura~
Thanks Laura for your kind comments! Appreciated!
Our minds take us back in our dreams and romance with reality. Well mine do anyway.
This reads like a thoughtful tribute to a respected person about whom you wander... 'why do you enter my dreams'.
Will you ever know why.... or are there verses you'll never publish?
I like it when a writers poetry encourages me, your reader, to create further mystery.... i.e. 'what is she not telling us here?'
(DuskArising subdues a naughty laugh).
LOL you won't get an answer out of me! I love your playful thoughts and laugh and maybe someday I will write on the matter. Thanks for stopping by!
Those dreams of time and friends gone by are always with us knowing that we will meet again - see you there Christina.
Thanks Andy, appreciate the kind words!
your poem brings me a positive feeling.
Thanks onepauly...very much appreciated!
Oh yes there is a little mystery to this. I like how you left it sort of open-ended. You captured the wonderful aspect that we can meet people in our dreams. Wonderful write of reminiscing on what appears to be a great childhood friendship
Thank You Santita! Really appreciate you stopping by! Appreciate it very much!
Well penned poem, Christina. Oftentimes we reflect on old friends, but it is better leaving sleeping dogs lie.
I agree, but I had fun with the poem. Thanks so much for your comments!
You're welcome.
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