KNOCK KNOCK
(1)
Knock knock smack smack
bang bang whack whack
pound pound tap tap
rap rap-a-tat-tat
cuff thud and thrash
swat slug and bash
I can’t ignore it any more
I’d best go see who’s at the door.
(2)
Knock knock the creaking door
Swings wide
And footsteps on the flagstone floor
Are heard inside
Her eyes look up her face alight
Arms open wide
Knock knock she welcomes me tonight.
- Author: Michael Edwards ( Offline)
- Published: November 16th, 2018 00:19
- Comment from author about the poem: From fusions - although now convalescing I haven't much new material so thought I'd publish these here - apologies if you've seen them before. The picture is one done for a family of five who wanted it for their hallway.'
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Two good ones Michael.
I hope all is well.
Thanks Andy - yes feeling a lot better this morning and the wound has now settled down. Still feeling a bit emotionally drained and i guess boredom will settle in as I am usually so proactive but will keep a low profile until the new year.
Are these two fine stanzas linked? Was it (1)Miss Berles knocking at the door, and then (2) you let her in?!
Another daft thing people say: 'I wonder who that is at the door?' But how will they know unless they open the door? It does help to do that!
Best wishes M.
That was Miss Berles - she studdied as a Knockerer upperer at Yale.
Aww for a moment there i thought it was going to be your pet dawg come home and overjoyed at seeing you.
It will all end in tears.
What will tear it? No dawg here but wouldn't mind one.
My typo.... i meant the wedding cake, in tiers.
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KNOCK KNOCK
Who's there ?
Cash
Cash who ?
No thanks ~ I'll have a PEANUT !
HI UNCLE MKE ~ Pleased your are recovering. Love your BALON ROUGE Painting a Classic. I'll commission one when Angela & I start a Family ! Angela has posted ~ A Seasonal Octet of Doublets ~ Seasons of My Mind ~ please check ~ THANKS ~ Yours BRIAN
I've done several commissions of the family so just ask. Cheers Brian -
How's that evening going M?
lucky!
You bet - you don't come any closer to the end of the line .
Nicely written Michael. Hope you are feeling much better.
Thanks for posting. 🙂
Still with post op pain and seeing the nurse for wound review on Monday but feeling better in myself - thanks so much.
Michael, I missed what happened to you initially, but have seen posts where people are wishing you good health.
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