Don't be forgotten

Poetic Dan

Please spit it out, all over the page
Filled with sadness or your rage
Don't just let it sit and rot
In your words you'll never be forgot

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 8th, 2019 04:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by someone's words I just read(- yeah, by Sugar Suicide) I thank them for being unperfectly perfectly them!
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  • Views: 23
  • User favorite of this poem: Writings From The Unknown13.
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Comments8

  • JaydeVictoria

    Exactly why I write true words!

    • Poetic Dan

      And what a more magical place that makes it, to know we are all open and hiding nothing!
      Thank you

    • orchidee

      So you remembered some words, for this poem! heehee.

      • Poetic Dan

        They came from other wonderful souls on this site... I just opened my mind 😉

      • Writings From The Unknown13

        were you possibly inspired by my writing "im no longer important to anyone anymore"?

        • Poetic Dan

          No it was a short piece called yeah, I've just read your wonderful words and got left feeling very numb. So many parts felt like me, I truly have no close friends but plenty of people I know.
          We are more important than we could ever dream off! Thank you for letting it flow

          • Writings From The Unknown13

            ohhh ok and thank you and it means alot that i could impact someone else to feel the same way i feel and see and feel what i feel

          • Fay Slimm.

            A sound and good reason for taking up words and making them work for our sadness or rage - - long live the healing in poetry Dan - thanks a lot for voicing this need.

            • Poetic Dan

              Absolutely my dear all credit goes to all of those that write but special one to sugar suicide 😉

            • Michael Edwards

              Words are the staff of all intellectual endeavour no matter what levels we reach - just spit them out.

              • Poetic Dan

                Thank you my friend just let it rip

              • sylviasearcher

                Sometimes it is all we can do 😊

                • Poetic Dan

                  And sometimes all we need with an ear to hear!

                • Neville

                  Poet's heal thy selves, or so the saying almost goes, or would that be better with a bit of prose... I dunno but I do know that if we get the chance to help some one else, then we maybe outa do it... Nice one Dan .....

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Thank you Good sir really enjoyed that rhyme, to help is what we're all here for!

                    • Neville

                      absolutely....

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Words on the page can rid oneself of so many bad thoughts.

                      • Poetic Dan

                        Absolutely and all over looked! How long must we say... The pen is mightier than the sword!



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