Harbour Side
The moon this night
Is ours
My very special friend
Tis ripe and ready for
The taking
Bathe naked in its glow
And stack those pretty
Smiles of yours
In row pon row on row
Then keep those eyes
Wide open gazing
Glazed till overcome
He wants to take you
By the harbour
Where gulls bad boys and
Voyeurs queue and argue
Each vying for a better view
Yes twas there in spite of
Saline sea sprayed wetness
Each enjoyed so much
That both were overcome
Face down and barely moving
Pleading long and loud tho
Like they’d not done since
They were very very young
Oh’ love I need to feel you
Pulsing pushing stroking
Do come inside I beg thee
Then afterwards when
Hardly breathing aching tho
On harbour side until the very
End of ends I’m yours
My very very special friend
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Author:
Neville (
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Superb sensuous soliloquy.
How cool is that.... bless ya GF60...... Neville
This invitation will move to the core that special friend - of that I am sure Nev ---- with all its assertions I do assure you it leaves this reader breathless........... saved into faves.
I am truly honoured and true... thank you Fay... thank you very much indeed.... Neville
Thanks should be from me - - My pleasure and sure Nev. - - the write ends with such appeal. - - - - - A classic no doubt after reading again..
am blushing again...
A fine write Neville. I will bring Fido along to bark at them voyeurs.
I would said shuperb shensous etc too, but I been on the sherry, as you see!
shank shu sho verry such... Z
I'm a pest. I keep adding water to sherry, whisky, etc. They will shoot me for it on here! lol.
Good acting innit? By both of us?!
yesh
Spell-checker goes mad with these words! It doeshn't like them mush.
Therein is love, adventure and devotion. The stuff of classic poetry and a must for my fav's.
Thank you Neville, a joy to read.
You really are most kind.. thank you DA .. I really am grateful .. Neville
A real poets poem - beautifully written.
How very kind, thank you Michael.... N
Ever think of written a PG-13, erotic novel?
what is a PG 13 erotic novel my friend?
I read your poem as sensual and erotic,
Did I go off on a tangent?
No.. I appreciate that I'm just not sure what a PG 13 erotic novel is.. I think I could write an erotic novel, in fact I am writing a couple of novels at the moment but not sure what PG 13 is/means unless parental guidance for over 13 year olds ... give us a clue
PG-13 rating, I was borrowing from the world of movies, since your poem though sensual avoids the use of obscenities and profanities.
I shall always endevour to avoid them..... N
A grand write, my friend.
thank you sir.. tis a much appreciated visit you have blessed me with .... N
And, I'll bless you again just for safe keeping.
Beautifully sensual and personal imagery, nicely done
Many thanks my friend ... Neville
What an incredibly sensual piece of poetry Neville, discovered here in your archives. Wonderfully written and not likely to be forgotten either. A masterpiece in a beautiful scenic setting.
Thank you so much for trawling back in time and resurrecting this particular little scribble Cassie .. I owe ya one my friend .. Neville
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