Poetic Dan

Known by some wondered by many

They call me captain gusher
You'll hear the Mermaids singing


Everytime I ring that bell
The splashing will commence


No plundering we're be making
You'll see my flag still waving


Surrounded by the shoal
All wanting to come onboard


Sailing the seven seas
There be no other like me


Like the mist on a voyage
Or the sudden rogue wave


I'll come so abruptly
You'll never forget my name!



  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 20th, 2019 01:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: I'm trying to have more fun with my writings, not sure how this will go down but it was energetically good for me to write. As I'm starting to feel like I'm finally keeping my head above emotional waters!
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  • Michael Edwards

    I'm afraid I'm not the greatest fan of the soul wrenching stuff but this is quite different - a celebration of words in an enjoyable read - keep writing Dan.

    • Poetic Dan

      Eye Eye captain!
      It did feel like a celebration 😉
      Really appreciated
      Thank you

    • Suresh

      I find you in a much calmer place, even with all the gushing and splashing.

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you, I do feel a wave of change running through me. Even at a time when I'm recovering from surgery!
        Always appreciated
        Thank you for your time
        Much peace and respect

      • Goldfinch60

        Your travels in words bring you to some amazing places
        , don't stop.

        • Poetic Dan

          Absolutely, keep roaming. Mind, body and soul 😉
          Always appreciated
          Thank you

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