Thunderous, your heart beats for her
But safe is your secret love
Unbeknownst to everyone
Except yourself and stars above
At sight of her
In silent awe, you stare
You’re mesmerized
Surrounded with her air
The words stop short
There upon your lips
Hesitation holds you hostage
On “I love you,” you trip
But your inner voice
Tells you to persevere
Believe in your heart
Confess your love sincere
You might not get another chance
It’s time to make a new plan
Pull out all the stops
Tell her while you can
Copyright © Accidental Poet 2021
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Author:
Sharon\'s Poet (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: For today, my poem is inspired by the same movie as yesterday's entry, "Forever Young" with Mel Gibson and Jamie Lee Curtis and Elija Wood. My entry today is inspired by Elija Wood's character Nat Cooper, a 10 year old boy who is in love with Alice, a girl he goes to school with. Nat has been asking Daniel (Mel Gibson) what he should do in regards to Alice. The video is a little dark to see, but is worth the watch. Thank you for watching. AP ; )
- Category: Love
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Comments5
Best get it out into the open and off ya chest .. such sweet words if not shared can fester in ya vest ..
heartfelt and otherwise lovely too my friend 🙂
Thanks N. Your words of wisdom always welcome. ; )
Nice choice of words => Unbeknownst +
You’re mesmerized
Surrounded with her air
I loved reading it, cheers
Thank you for the read. Glad you enjoyed it. ; )
for tomorrow may never come
One never knows Ron. Thanks for the read and comment. ; )
you`re vwelcome
Great words and fabulous film extract AP, thank you for sharing them.
Andy
Thanks Andy. 50 years ago, that little boy was me. This movie really hits home for me. ; )
a wonderful message
thanks for sharing dear poet
Thank you LB. ; )
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