My broken heart bleeds
into the eventide
My shattered soul
full of pain and tears
My thoughts fill with
doubts personified
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My lips quiver as my
lonely tear drops slide
My heart is tethered
to my soul's fears
My broken heart bleeds
into the eventide
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Trembling in fear ,
losing my pride
Wishing love's magic
dust were here
My thoughts fill with
doubts personified
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Will twilight's beams
leave me satisfied
Will "I love you's" ever
echo in my ears?
My broken heart bleeds
into the eventide
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Love's blissful nectar,
oh why is it denied?
My shattered soul
crying in crimson tears
My thoughts fill with
doubts personified
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My Valentine's dreams
leave me teary-eyed
Magnifying my pain
and all my fears
My broken heart bleeds
into the eventide
My thoughts fill with
doubts personified
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Author:
Dove (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 8th, 2022 12:34
- Comment from author about the poem: Wishing you all a Happy Valentine’s! Here’s a poem (Villanelle) for the broken hearted!
- Category: Sad
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Comments6
Nice. Villanelles are such a fun poetic form that I often avoid but when someone can create a meaningful one it is amazing. Good job! 👍
Thanks again Rocky! Much appreciated
I do hope your neat villanelle was FOR the broken hearted, and not you right now, Dove.
Indeed, maybe once upon a time! But happy now
The relief, Dove Dear!
I am sure that you are not the broken hearted Dove and that love is always with you.
Andy
Very nice. Learnt something new today, villanelle, another style of poetry. Thank you.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the poem!
Wow a soulful superb vilanelle for the broken hearted, such appealing words longing and missing love, must be terrible, can only imagine how it feels , though having love in life is not piece of cake for all yet having none is more painful. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
Happy Belated Valentine's! Thanks for a most beautiful comment!
this is rather special my dear friend & I have more than just a sneaking suspicion that this is but a demonstration of your poetic versatility & far from autobiographical ........... x5 *****'s 🙂
Indeed dear Neville... Thanks !!! A bunch
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