Love's Dues

Fay Slimm.

 

 

 

Love's Dues.

Love, blind to weakness sees what it chooses     
yet when gladness turns frigid 

rights could be abused.

Coldness inhibits in frowns of refusal 
to enhance tender passion

thus scorning love's dues.

We what we are bear discord as duty  
but love writes no duets for  

rarely shared music.   

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 14th, 2022 03:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: HAPPY VALENTINE DAY TO ALL LOVERS. -A POST WRITTEN BACK SOME TIME AGO BUT HOPE YOU ENJOY -
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  • dusk arising

    Indeed love can become a duel, fought at dawn and lasting all week till somebody sensible - the male of course - gives in when he realises her last two hubbies died of food poisoning.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Ha ha - - you always come up with a corker my lovely - - am still giggling at that last line.

    • Rozina

      So apt, so true. Love works wonders.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Thank you Rozina.

      • L. B. Mek

        'but when shadows cast images
        sight could be abused.

        Doubt born of judgement frowns in refusal'..
        (some truly profound insights in these lines,
        I couldn't help but connect your words
        'admittedly, in a roundabout way'
        to the theme of my post today)
        thanks for reposting, dear Fay
        another memorable poem
        (Happy Valentine's day, dear Poet
        'even if only
        in remembrance and dreams
        if we have a valentine to call upon
        that to, is a blessing
        we should be thankful for) 🌹🌹🌹

        • Fay Slimm.

          A thoroughly lovely comment and thank you my friend.

        • spilleronsheet

          A duet
          A duel
          Writing a song
          Or dwelling upon on swords
          Love makes the most sane, insane above all
          So well penned dear Fay

          • Fay Slimm.

            Agree dear spills love is the taker and the insane-maker and no doubt about it. Thanks for your visit and read.

          • orchidee

            A fine write Fay.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Thank you dear Orchi.

            • Rocky Lagou

              Ohhhhh. "More than just music?" *wink wink* hehe. Anyways. Lovely poem Fay! 💖😉

              • Fay Slimm.

                Big wink in return and glad you found more than just love's dues in the read dear Rocky - - thanks a load for stopping by to give the piece a review.

              • Michael Edwards

                Love does indeed compose a duet - great words Fay.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  Ah - - thought that line would appeal to you Mike - thanks a lot for dropping by for a read of Love's Dues.

                • Jerry Reynolds

                  A fine write, Fay.
                  Love sweet love- duel or duet pay your dues and enjoy the ride.

                • Crowns4Christ

                  Love can be many things, I thank you for this poem Faye,

                • Goldfinch60

                  That duet can be there forever Fay.

                  Andy

                • Neville


                  I was always brought up to always pay one's dues .. I know its late but felt compelled to leave my mark here regardless of the cost .... can't beat a bit o love now can one .. 🙂 x

                  • Fay Slimm.

                    Agreed most wholeheartedly mon ami - a bit of love-dovey fits every bill in my book - am delighted you left your mark on my offering and thanking you muchly for this welcome comment ..............x .....and x



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