in your face i see a wonder
in your eyes a chance to be
in a place i used to long for
a place which always escaped me
but in my heart i hold a feeling
for in my soul burn memories
how i crashed and burned in a living hell
and fell down to my knees
so if i seem a little hesitant
please dont think it that i dont want
and if i seem a little slow to start
i'm only proctecting my beating heart
battered but unbeaten
my beating heart
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Author:
dusk arising (
Offline) - Published: February 17th, 2022 05:07
- Comment from author about the poem: something from 2019 revisited, i think my muse is in China with the winter olympics
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so relatable!
thanks for sharing it again Dusk
Empowering and boosting my morales
I am scared
I am hesitant
To the opportunities life throws at me
And these lines like an armour
“ so if i seem a little hesitant
please dont think it that i dont want
and if i seem a little slow to start
i'm only proctecting my beating heart
battered but unbeaten
my beating heart”
Truly inspiring
Lovely lines and very real and relatable.
Wow the double entendre with the last line "my beating heart" was very clever. This poem is glorious! ✨👏
Another top notcher dusk - never call it a day.
Beautifully written my friend!
Thanks for sharing
That beating heart overcomes all problems in our lives and will go on beating for a very long time.
Andy
A sheltering write, DA, laced with so much solace and comfort for the fragile heart. I love how the emotive message unfurls...
A heart that beats with unbeatable courage and hope comes out tops in this honest account of battering happenings - - a moving write my dear friend.
one day ... maybe, I hope you realise just how good at this game you really are ................................. Neville
Brilliantly written! Love that you end with "battered but unbeaten", ending in a positive note. Great job!
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