Where Went Love ?
Where went that secret Spring of love ?
Those falling torrents of sudden
laughter when Summer-dry scuffles left
sand in ham sandwiches and shy toes
touched toes with coupled intention,
*
where twilight saw exciting dares,
like racing to be first in ocean cover
stripped for skinny-dip kissing
and more made our Autumn such fun.
Where went those vows never to part ?
We aimed to make love forever
before cold Winter goodbyes started
an unforeseeable chain of events
that broke belief in faithful hearts.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments11
'Where the excitement of friendly larks,
racing to get first in the ocean
when stripped to try skinny-dips, oh
and those *sloppy wet kisses
we shared while dusk fell to dark.'
Brilliant!
(ah, dear Fay
your brushstroke wording, paint such vivid scenes)
bitterness of melancholy, inked sincere sweet
Intense we’re the emotions
The love was so deep
Deeper than an ocean
And darker than the nights painting the night sky
In those nights
The lovers lost
Departed though across
“Where went love “ told a hypnotic tale with melancholy shades
Very emotive write my dear friend
... this is more than just both sad & beautiful, it is beautifully sad too ... x
Ah - -- thanking you both for leaving the piece a review but for reviewing so kindly the "Where Went Love" piece.............x
A fine write Fay.
Spring comes round again, but I dread the skinny dipping bit. It makes me swoon! lol.
Don't be such a snowflake, says Fido. heehee.
I really like this poem, Fay! It delights and does not disappoint in remembrances of days gone past.
Lol what a visual, skinny dipping and then running ... Oh love is just as fleeting!
Beautiful to read!
You worded this to a T. Such a strong emotion expressed so beautifully. Bravo! 💖
Beautiful words.
I love reading these lovely words of yours. Thank you.
Very emotive words Fay, so sad that all that love was lost.
Andy
Spring love, passionate love, love nearing the end resulting in lost love. Brilliant ! With your words, you were able to make my heart sad...in a good way. Thank you
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