A Scatter of Moments
She was far more than a scatter of moments
a series of
breath-taking dreams ..
Part familiar
yet somehow remaining distant and torn
along the line
of some fucking invisible seam ..
She was stillness and silent, a sparkle a glint ..
She was the scent
of wild flowers, of rivers and streams ..
Yes indeed,
she was a scatter of moments, a calm soothing
balm on a hot summer day
She was a lover
a stranger an enigma a friend ..
She was wholesome, yet broken, a cool mist
and a promise
at the end of a very long day ..
Yes, my love was more than a scatter of moments by far ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: He's back & glad to be .. you may all stand down, take a bow and please accept my very sincere thanks ....................... Neville :)
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beautifully put this tribute to a special someone dear nev --- glad to know you're back home again and writing romance....................x
its good to be back dear Lady Fay .. and thank you so muchly for the warm welcome & kind thoughts you have bestowed upon my most recent scribble .................................... x
Ah yes, those opioid induced hospital bed dreams....... LOL .... It's so good to get home though.... hope you didn't pick up any horrible hospital infections (I'm still suffering from one i picked up last Oct).
Wishing you a speedy recovery.
I know full well you are familiar with such cognitive distortions DA .. and yes sir .. it is, let's just say being back home is as near to heaven as I shall ever get probably get ............. I feel on the mend already but need wait two weeks for the results of biopsies to come through .......... blimey, since October .. but I imagine your immune system has been somewhat compromised .. fingers crossed .. hopefully it wont drag on for much longer .........Neville
What a great write - tears in my eyes as I know my wife of so many years is suffering and all we have is hope. Keep writing dear friend.
You have touched me greatly & often over these last few years Michael but never so much as you have today sir ......... I know your dear wife is presently not well & how I wish that were not so .. and with all my heart, I hope her condition and situation improves ................. Neville
Good write N. Best wishes.
........................................................................... thank you Steven 🙂
Can ya beat those moments? Which ones? Answer: any of them ya wish to recall!
What am I waffling on about?! lol.
I dunno Mr. O but ta for taking a mo to show ..................................................... Neville 🙂
A lovely tribute with great lines. Hope you’re recovering well.
I am Roz .. thank you kindly .................................. Neville
So glad to know you are on the mend and writing...A beautiful tribute to someone special and so eloquently written indeed......C
Mending nicely I hope ................... Cheers C ....................................... Neville 🙂 x
Lovely! A little memory pocket full of joy! Hope you have a great day!
what a lovely thing to say, I shall have to remember that .. better write it down quick or someone may nick it .. bless you Rocky 🙂
Hehe! It's all yours 😉 Have a good one!
Neville,
Love the title…
the ending words lend themselves to the cohesiveness of your entire poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
.................................................................. Bless you my dear Lady Laura 🌻
May those moments of love come together Neville and give you total fulfilment.
Andy
Cheers Andy ................... N 🙂
Beautiful writing ) a lovely poem
I am so glad you found these words Violet.. thank you and dearly .. N
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