smiling with the butterflies
laughter enlights her cobalt eyes
glance ecstasy personified
in barefoot dancing pale levi's
. as outside silent night sweeps by
. in duvet slumbers dreams i lie
. where years desires carefree fly
. till dawning's kiss
. of sweet goodbye
each motion making mockery
a passion hence denied in me
till lovers final harmony
enraged my thundering timpani
. as outside silent night sweeps by
. quiet calls a stifled cry
. memory time cannot deny
. of dawnings kiss
. and last goodbye
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Author:
dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: something about dreaming from a few years back, how time flies.
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- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Dahlia.
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Comments6
'enraged my thundering timpani'..
what imagery!
immersing us, in that crackling
monotone, drumming of our pulses
whilst traversing
that impending inevitability
of a love's
last, remaining autumnal leaf
surrendering, its grip...!
(a heartbreakingly beautiful depiction, Dusk
thank you!)
there are no two ways about it .. or if's n buts .. you are indeed one day gonna be one of the greats sir ........................ Neville
excellently penned
have a great day!
Dahlia
Very reminiscent and nostalgic. I sense this strange sensation you've described and I can relate. You've explained it finely.
You never fail - another joy of a read.
Beautiful emotive words d a.
Andy
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