silent night

dusk arising

 

 

 

 

smiling with the butterflies
laughter enlights her cobalt eyes     
glance ecstasy personified
in barefoot dancing pale levi's

.       as outside silent night sweeps by
.       in duvet slumbers dreams i lie
.       where years desires carefree fly
.           till dawning's kiss
.                    of sweet goodbye

each motion making mockery
a passion hence denied in me
till lovers final harmony
enraged my thundering timpani


.        as outside silent night sweeps by
.        quiet calls a stifled cry
.        memory time cannot deny
.              of dawnings kiss
.                      and last goodbye

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 28th, 2022 03:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: something about dreaming from a few years back, how time flies.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 32
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Dahlia
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  • L. B. Mek

    'enraged my thundering timpani'..
    what imagery!
    immersing us, in that crackling
    monotone, drumming of our pulses
    whilst traversing
    that impending inevitability
    of a love's
    last, remaining autumnal leaf
    surrendering, its grip...!
    (a heartbreakingly beautiful depiction, Dusk
    thank you!)

  • Neville



    there are no two ways about it .. or if's n buts .. you are indeed one day gonna be one of the greats sir ........................ Neville

  • Dahlia

    excellently penned
    have a great day!
    Dahlia

  • Rocky Lagou

    Very reminiscent and nostalgic. I sense this strange sensation you've described and I can relate. You've explained it finely.

  • Michael Edwards

    You never fail - another joy of a read.

  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful emotive words d a.

    Andy



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