it was his way
anticipation
let her breathe a while
maturity would reward him
upon moistened lips
his tongue would savour
oh aromatic thrill
his fingers began to caress
curves of pleasure
yes
full bodied
and beautifully rounded
now!
no more teasing
he knew she was ready
he drank of her
lustfully
greedily
head swimming
with sheer delight
savouring her finesse
he'd waited and here at last
gratification
no immature cheap tart taint
of the barrell room here
but a fine rich burgandy wine
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dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: something again from 2017
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Superb!
Thank you talisman.
This is wonderful! I just love reading these types of writes....Christina
LOL i'm pleased that you enjoyed it, thank you.
some sips, surpass our wildest dreams
and nourish, every pulsing corner of our lives...
some, are just alcohol poisoning
waiting to take effect
and infect, all that we once cherished...
(a great write!
sorry if my interpretation of your metaphor
was off the mark, Dusk)
Thank you LBM. For me it's all about anticipation, patience and absorbing the moments of the sheer pleasure of a fine wine.
Nice one,take care
Thank you dean.
A passionate gulp with all the taste of a fine wine. I'm so glad you didn't write about a cheap wine love. Great write Dusk
Don't gulp a fine wine, no no. Savour it. Thank you sorrenbarrett.
At first my mind went to “SEX,” but then I took a second read and I feel that this is just that moment of infatuation when that bond with lover and self becomes almost unbearable to handle. It’s really intense.
Was intended as a tease Rocky to lead one into thinking of one thing whilst all the time it's about a wine and even the curves of the bottle and glass. A bit of fun I hope.
I depend on you for my porn poetry... Oh my.
Only too willing to oblige as and when. Thank you jarcher.
nicely done poet, this one takes the reader on a roller coaster...enjoyed...
Dahlia
Oooh roller coasters can be frightening and upset the stomache. I hope this was a lot less traumatic but fun nonetheless. Thank you Dahlia.
Dear Dusk,
Was this about the wine or are you trying to imply something else ? Wonderful write but really looking for an answer 🙂
Trying? Well you read it, is something else implied or not? LOL
hahaha. Dear Dusk ! You got me to a soup ! 🙂 Now my mind will go wild, but really wanted to know the poet's angle.
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Nice one dusk.
Thank you sir.
I prefer Rioja d a.
Andy
Well written!!! I love reading poems like this.
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