taking colours she has stolen
from out my sweetest dreams
she paints a journey
leading from my heart
through crowded rooms
and whisperings
to my waiting train stood long
now ready to depart
pastel shades of blue become
golden fields aflame
casting jewels of sheer desire
'cross the canvas of my soul
pulse of passion clouds my sight
as light of reason slips
and brutal urge within creates
needs beyond control
the early hours reach out
and crawl to light of dawn
where hearts lay fragile, tender
beneath a quilt of fear
emboldened love reassures
in passion now re-born
and hesitation 'ere within
lifts her veil and disappears
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Author:
dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: something i begn to write a long time ago.This is about falling in love after a long time of being alone.
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Comments13
So beautiful ! 🙂 lovely writing , dusk ))
Fantastic done and Mellow morning read, may that love stay deep within me!
And you if you want it? lol
Super words d a.
Andy
As always, dusk, wonderful. Thanks
Sometimes the wait is worth it, and how many times does someone really special come into your life, and into your life at the right time too.
Good times ahead, methinks.
These are excellent visual words and i swear dusk, they belong in a poetry book! Great job!
Pure poetry - I've read it several times and it just gets better.
Hesitation lifting her veil is such a sheer dream of a line to read aloud
- -- you have excelled yet again dear Dusk with this taste of love after so long alone. Must have this in my list.
Very well done, a style I have never tried but can appreciate. Great write Love conquers all.
Beautiful words, phrasing, sentiment. May love keep you in its arms and hold you dear.
The lovely words that lace
The beautiful emotions that weds
Uniting at the core of hearts
A beautiful analogy “ depart “
What a lover shall yearn
A greatest compliment
The pastel shades that you use
Strings her heart
Soon comes the spring
When the winter departs
Yearning for the refreshing breeze amidst the blazing sun
The striking words lace the poetry
Causing a sudden stop to the chaotic hearts
Very beautiful dear Dusk
An endless piece of praise feels like writing for such fine art
'beneath a quilt of fear
emboldened love reassures
in passion now re-born
and hesitation 'ere within'..
simply Beautiful imagery, what choice wording
thank you, dear Poet
Wow. I love this bittersweet seperation you portray. It feels so real and the colors you paint brings to the mind pictures that dance your words across the screen. Beauty.
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