Crossed.
Always gyrating, deplete from neediness
sad relationships zigzag between circuits
of in-complete spheres that rotating feed
spirals of badly-crossed wires by inserting
charged breaks in partner-resolving. Bent
on pivotal lack a shock reels at any vortex
and begin knock-back swerving by meant
detours around uncaring known shortage
in deficient installments - for commitment
to defective love reaps force turned bitter.
And that could lead to beginnings of wars.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: TO ALL CONCERNED FRIENDS - A sigh of relief that after sudden banishment two weeks ago from this poetry site I am mysteriously and suddenly allowed entrance again - -- delighted however to be able to offer postings and comment on others' entries before having installed next week a new and quicker machine while crossing my fingers and hoping that unexplained experience does not happen again........... after an unwelcome absence sending warmest of hugs - - from Fay.
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Good write Fay.
Happened to me, or rather I could not access the site for a few days.
Joined up elsewhere, but complicated site, 'noisy' or too 'busy' with requests, adverts, etc.
Yes it seems to be more than myself who was banned for a number of days Orchi - - glad to know we are both allowed back now again.
I was wondering where you were! My experience with this site is if you enter your password incorrectly more than once it's this whole rigamarole you have to go through. so glad you are back!! Great write for today, by the way. So glad you get to share them again!
You are so right Christina that if any site has an incorrect password they seem to flip - has happened once with me and my bank and oh boy it took an age to sort. Good to be allowed back here again though.
Warmest of hugs received - and a big welcome back
Bless you and thank you my long-time poetry-pal................ hugs back at ya too.
So good to see you here again. Welcome back, I certainly missed your fine posts and comments on here. The place just wasn't the same withoutcha.
I hope your snazzy new device is an absolute dream to use and encourages you to tickle the keys with evermore poetry for our delight.
Today I'm recovering from over indulging in alcohol and reading your post hasn't helped my head at all LOL. Yes with all those crossed wires going on one could even fall out with ones self. To quote a song lyric from good old King Crimson "confusion will be my epitaph"
Never got you in line for a hang-over dear Dusky - try sucking a lemon as they say that works a treat. - Good to see your wit is still in tack though - great to be back here again.
Good to see you back Fay.
Andy
Everything is slow beyond measure with this old machine but at least I am getting let in again Andy - - they say I caught a virus - - ha - strange is never gave me any symptom but stopped up my computer instead,
Good poem Fay .. interesting words .. I’m not sure what happened or what went wrong .. but it’s so nice to have you on here ))
How kind of you to let me know I was missed dear friend - I certainly missed reading your beautiful verses on nature.
Ahh' that's better ........................... x
Ah - well if you say so it is.............................. good eh to be back together again - with all friends I mean.................x
I was experiencing withdrawal symptoms, dear Fay
glad you're 'wired' back-in!
'Bent on pivotal
lack a shock
reels at any vortex
and begin
knock-back swerving
by meant detours
around uncaring known
shortage
in deficient installments'..
(when we give, all we have
and they count out - their receipt's
to insure, they
don't lose out
in this game they're making of romance
and our potholed, heart's...
and all we can do, is pay that bill
of fate
and save
what part of heart's, remain
untainted
by their callous, indifference..)
this, that cruelty
in romance's, calculative
ill-intent!
Yes I am wired in again dear Mek and so glad to see friends like yourself with support and constructing all sorts of glorious stories on love. Top marks for your interpretation of Crossed and indeed methinks it reads better than my verbose offering.
And a wonderful comeback indeeed. This is great Fay! Continue writing to your heart's desire!
I will certainly try to do just that Rocky and thank you muchly for such kind encouragement . Glad you enjoyed the read.
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