A Free Flow Attempt

Rozina

 

The brook meanders along

Its bed of sand and leaves and stones

Sunlight glimpsed through a canopy of leaves

Dazzled the brook

Sparkling diamonds in its path.

A bird swoops down.

A treasure for her nest?

No, it's just a stone, the bird flies back to her tree

The brook meanders on.....

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My first free verse poem attempt. Rhyming style is easier for me! Will keep on trying various forms of poetry that I am learning about. 

  • Author: Rozina (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2022 04:44
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  • orchidee

    Why yes, meander on in more fine free verse!

    • Rozina

      Thank you orchidee.

    • dean langmuir

      Nice write,take care

      • Rozina

        Thank you.

      • Saxon Crow

        For a first attempt you write like a master. Brilliant poem

        • Rozina

          Wow! Thank you very much for that.

        • Ok Waleed

          This was cool

          • Rozina

            Thank you.

          • Paul Bell

            Free verse is the way ahead, makes it a story and that makes the journey interesting.

            • Rozina

              Thank you. I need to practise and let the section of the brain that keeps wanting to rhyme to switch off for a while.

            • FallenAngel1🕊

              Beginners luck? I think not Rozina. I echo Saxon Crows comment.🥂🌹🕊🌞

              • Rozina

                Thank you so much.

              • Christina8

                I also enjoy rhyming poems but written like a true poet. Great job at a first attempt!!

                • Rozina

                  Thank you!

                • Rocky Lagou

                  So nice to see your free verse. I almost always write in that style and it honestly feels really liberating, there's a lot of freedom in the style. An amazing poem, indeed.

                  • Rozina

                    Thank you. I actually found this more difficult to write than my rhyming ones.

                  • Michael Edwards

                    Well you didn't do too badly at all - a little gem of a write.

                    • Rozina

                      Thank you. Free verse, limericks, sonnets, haikus, senryus, so many types of poems I am learning about on MPS.

                      • Michael Edwards

                        When I write serious stuff (whuich I do sometimes) free verse is my favourite. Yes it's a good community here on MPS.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Super write Rozina.

                        Andy

                        • Rozina

                          Thank you Andy.

                        • Neville



                          I see congratulations are in order .. well done Roz ................. Neville

                          • Rozina

                            Thanks Neville.

                          • sorenbarrett

                            The story telling is good. The images are fitting and it like the stream flows well.

                            • Rozina

                              Thank you.



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