My Sunset Sky.

Goldfinch60



Having had a good long life

I can look back and see the wonder,

The wonder of all the good times.

At the age I now am

I find that clouds come floating,

Floating into my life occasionally.

But they no longer carry rain,

Or usher in storms,

They add colour to my sunset sky.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2022 01:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: Life is good.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 38
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  • Neville


    How lovely is that eh' .. spectacular springs to mind .. and hey, you just can't beat a decent sunset sky .. N 🙂

    • Goldfinch60

      So kind Neville, thank you.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.

    • Rozina

      Beautiful words indeed.

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind Rozina, thank you.

        Andy

      • Michael Edwards

        Every sky, from blue to grey and everything in between, is a thing of beauty but it takes a poet or an artist to appreciate the fact - great write.

        • Goldfinch60

          so true Michael, we are surrounded by beauty, thank you.

          Andy

        • Saxon Crow

          Wonderfully introspective

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind SC, thank you.

            Andy

          • L. B. Mek

            'hope springs eternal!' whenever
            I read your poetry, Andy
            what a gift, to share with the world
            thank you!

            • Goldfinch60

              So glad you you see it like that Mek, it is the way I am, thank you.

              Andy

            • dusk arising

              Those clouds enhance the view of a good sunset Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                They certainly do d a.

                Andy

              • John Prophet

                Know the feeling as I enter my 70’s next month.

                • Goldfinch60

                  The start of a better life John, I am having a great time in my seventies.

                  Andy

                • Rocky Lagou

                  Yes. A wonderful reminder that life does carry hope. Lovely imagery. Thanks.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    It certainly does Rocky, thank you.

                    Andy

                  • Bella Shepard

                    I love the title, and I can certainly relate to that time of life. You see the world through different eyes, different colors. Beautiful write!

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Most kind Bella and much appreciated, thank you.

                      Andy



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